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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 20, 2012, 08:14 pm »
Chapter 3

--Mrez--

I was walking through an abandoned town when I found it.

It was an armored sports car, and it was destined to be mine.

I picked it open and hot-wired it. It turned on.

"Oh yea. Look at this.", I said to myself.

I looked through a few CD cases in the car and found 90's rock and rock-esque CDs. I was pleased, for I'm a fan of this type of music. Don't tell anyone. I put a Powerman 5000 CD in and played "When Worlds Collide". Just when I did this, a small gang of 4 humans approached the car from small alleys a distance away.

One caught my eye. His name was Hax, and he was an assassin. I looked  behind me and found a small signature grenade bomb that could've only been made by Hax himself. From past experience, I pulled a wire out and it deactivated. I then turned around, put on my seatbelt, turned up the music, and floored it.

I took a matter of seconds for me to catch up with them. They jumped out of the way, but I was lucky and I hit one in the leg.

"AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! MY LEG!!!!!!," I barely heard the crippled victim say.

Out of pure cruelty and self-pleasure, I went in reverse. I "accidently" turned the wheel a bit and crushed his skull. The vague screaming stopped. It must've happened so fast that the 3 others were too scared to do anything. One man, a pimp-looking sir, ran away with a cane. The other two, Hax and an unnamed human, were somewhat frightened, but brave enough to fight an elf in an armored sports car, as opposed to A Pimp Named Slickback.

I killed the engine and got out. I wanted to have fun.

I pulled out my two pistols and said to Hax, "Come at me, bro."

He pulled out his sword and ran after me. His friend went after me with a sword as well.

I shot the friend and ran after Hax. The friend fell to the ground with a bullet in his brain. I shot at Hax, but he was quick enough to deflect the bullet with his sword. We were close. I shot his hand and he dropped his sword. I then hit him on his head and he fell on his knees.

"Why do you want me dead?", I asked Hax.
"Personal business.", he replied.
"Personal business? Ha. Ha! HA! PERSONAL BUSINESS?! HAHAHAHA! LET ME SHOW YOU PERSONAL BUSINESS!", I yelled at Hax.

--Ishmael--

"So, tell me about yourself, Ishmael. If I'm gonna travel with ya, I gotta know ya.", said Chuck.
"Well, I'm a 23-year-old body builder. I like long walks on the beach, sunsets, and drawing swastikas. Heil Hitler!", I jokingly replied.
Chuck looked at me with a puzzled face. I think he wasn't sure if I was joking or serious.
"I'm joking, Chuck. I wasn't serious."
He relaxed and laughed so hard that I wasn't sure if he was just laughing hard or if he was having an asthma attack. He was laughing so long that he ran out of air and was laughing somewhat silently. Eventually, he was just twitching with a smile on his face. It was disturbing.

Then, I smelled sweet smoke. It was the smell of a Genesis Fire Temple.

"CHUCK! ARISE! GENESIS EXPERIMENTS ARE COMING!", yelled I.
He arose.
"Follow me. Slowly.", I instructed.

He obeyed. We walked to a boulder and hid behind it. We observed the ongoing situation.

"...so that's why I don't give a splode about your life, human! Now, prepare to die!", said an elf that was cleverly disguised as a human, which isn't a hard task to do.
A man was sneaking behind the elf. He was holding a cane. When he got close enough, he pulled a sword from his cane.

"SWORD CANE!", he yelled. He charged toward the elf. The elf moved one of his two pistols to the man and pulled the trigger. It was so quick, I almost didn't know what happened. The elf never moved his head to look behind him. The man fell to the ground with a bullet wound perfectly positioned between his two eyes.

Chuck aimed his bow and arrow at the elf. Chuck released the arrow which was also shot at by the elf. The bullet hit the arrow right at the tip.

This time, the elf turned his head. He saw Chuck and I.

"ISHMAEL! I SEE YOU! YOU'RE A TRAITOR!", yelled the elf.
"And you are?!", I yelled back.
"I AM MREZ! I DON'T APPRECIATE THIS UNFAIR FIGHT! 3 AGAINST 1 IS IMPOSSIBLE, EVEN FOR ME!"
"Run along before we test your hypothesis and prove it correct!", yelled I.

He looked down at the human and then back at us.

"He's yours!", Mrez yelled. Mrez sprinted away so fast that not even the most skilled marksman with the most precise gun could hit him.

"Thank you!" the human shouted. "It's not every day that a genesis helps a human!"
"You're welcome! I'm Ishmael! Who are you?", I replied.
"I'm Hax! Nice to meet you and your friend!"

Chuck looked at him with a worried face.

"What's the problem?", I asked Chuck.

Chuck turned at me slowly and said, "He's an assassin. He's out for someone. I bet that it's me."
"Why would that be?", I asked Chuck.
Chuck said, "I think that I should tell you about me now."

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Posted By: NellacPrivate.

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Posted By: Dale18Private


Private

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 15, 2012, 06:39 pm »
Finished with Chapter 2.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 15, 2012, 02:48 pm »
Posted By: mrezmanWRITE. MOAR. NAO. *runs around whacking a cane*


I'm working on the part of the chapter that your character narrates right now.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 15, 2012, 02:35 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 14, 2012, 08:13 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBump so that people can apply.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 13, 2012, 05:51 pm »
Posted By: mrezmanWRITE MOAR!!! NAO!


OK FINE

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 13, 2012, 05:43 pm »
Posted By: kittysocksWhere's meh? :o


You'll come up sometime soon.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 10:27 pm »
Posted By: mrezmanZOMG epic
I love it, great work.


Thanks! :DDD

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 10:27 pm »
Posted By: peytonfire123When do I come in to be part of the jorney to help


Chapter 2 isn't finished yet. You may appear there. If not, then you'll definately appear in Chapter 3.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 10:12 pm »
removed

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 10:11 pm »
--Mrez--

"Mrez, our loyal servant, you have done us well.", said Genesis Master Alfredo.
"Thank you, Master Alfredo. What is it that you wish me to do now?", I asked.
"We need you now more than ever before. You must infiltrate the ranks of the human daevas and retrieve the Holy Mechanoid so that we may cleanse the Earth, for it is not fit for a new age of Ahura Mazda's rule!", said Master Komodo.
"YESSIR! ANYTHING FOR THE DIVINE CAUSE!", I said.
I looked around the Master Congress Room and noticed that the Infected One (or as we call them, "Forgiven Ones") Master, named Zoroastrian was missing.
"Where's Master Zoroastrian?", I inquired.
The Masters looked at each other and whispered.
"We feel that you may be trusted with this classified information. He was on a holy quest given to him by Neozoroaster, the new prophet, to kill Ishmael. Ishmael was assisted by some unknown third party, which saved his life,but resulted in the death of Master Zoroastrian. If anyone else asks, say that he passed on. No one must know of the quest.", said Master Canid.
"Yes sir. Praise Mazda!", I yelled.
"PRAISE MAZDA!", the Genesis Masters yelled in unison.

I departed from the Master Congress Room.

Before I continue, I should explain to you what the Genesis Masters are. The Genesis Masters are holy men picked by the prophet, named Neozoroaster. There is one Genesis Master per Genesis Experiment species. Neozoroaster is a mysterious man to many, but he is the prophet of what the humans call the "Genesis Cult". We call it "Genesis Zoroastrianism". We believe that Zoroaster was a human that was picked by Ahura Mazda to prepare the world for Neozoroaster, which is the Genesis Experiment chosen by Ahura Mazda to lead the Genesis Experiments to complete the "Divine Cause", which is to kill al of humanity so that the Earth may be clean for Ahura Mazda's holy presence.

I went to the Genesis Fire Temple to be blessed before I depart on my mission. I approached the fire altar at the entrance and put some sweet smelling wood into the flame. It grew, and the air smelled nice.

"You may now enter, Mrez. May Mazda be with you.", said the priest.
"Mazda be with you, priest.", I replied.

The fire temple is a big, dim-lighted place. There are small bowls of water everywhere, and there are small fires in fire altars in every corner and in the center of each room. The walls look like they're walls in an adobe. The temple is very warm do to the large presence of fire.

I approached the door to Neozoroaster's room. A priest stopped me.

"You may not enter. You need permission.", said the priest.
"It's ok. I'm Mrez.", I replied.
"Oh. Well, in that case, enter the room of the prophet."

I entered the room. It was a dark place with a few lit candles in the corners and a bowl of water in the center. The prophet was meditating by the bowl. He was wearing black robes, so I couldn't see his face.

"Ah, yes. You are Mrez. Are you ready to be blessed?", the prophet asked. He had a deep voice.
"Yes, Prophet Neozoroaster. Bless me."

I sat down across from him. He dipped his right hand in the water and flicked some water at my head. He reached in his robe and pulled out some flower pedals. He held them in his left hand and put them in the bowl.

"Put your face in the water.", he said.

I obeyed. I heard a quick muffled prayer before he pulled my head out.

"You are blessed. Embark on your journey.", he said.
"Thank you, prophet."

I arose and left the temple. I made a quick trip to my home and grabbed my things before I left the village and went to the human camp.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 10:11 pm »
Chapter 2

--Ishmael--

I awoke on my homemade mattress inside my cold cave. It was late at night, and I felt something breathing on my neck. Cautious, I grabbed my Amazon Kindle and used it as a flashlight to see what it was.

It was an Infected One.

I yelled and jumped back, which startled the creature and made it crawl back awake from me. It was in a fetal position in a corner of rocks. Its expression was scared, but not very courageous. This made me feel safe enough to approach it.

"Hey there, little guy. I won't hurt you. I'm a Genesis Experiment too.", I said unto it in a kind, high-pitched tone.

It seemed to instantly relax when I said that I was a Genesis Experiment as well. He arose from his cowardly position and looked at me.
"Thank God. I thought that you were a human.", it said.
"Why would you think that?"
"Because you sound like one."
"Wait a minute. You're talking. How are you talking?", I inquired.
"My brain matter hasn't been worn down by the disease. Praise Ahura Mazda for letting me keep my sentience."
"Whoa. You're Zoroastrian?"
"Yes. How'd you know?"
"You praised Ahura Mazda, the deity of Zoroastrianism.", said I.
"Are you Zoroastrian?", he asked.
"No.", I replied.
"Well, then what are you?"
"That's personal."
"Well, then may I know your name?"
"I'm Ishmael. Who are you?"
"I am Zoroastrian."
"I know that, but what's your name?"
"I just told you..."
"So, you're a Zoroastrian named Zoroastrian?"
"Yea... I've thought about changing it to something more... creative? Yea... creative..."
"So, why are you here?", I asked.
"Well, I needed a place to stay for the night, so I picked this cave. I'm night blind, so I didn't see you."
I looked around and noticed that my AK-47 was missing.
"MY AK! WHAT DID YOU DO WITH IT?!", I irately inquired.
"Oh... yea... the AK...that gun...yea, I took it. I was about to kill you with the bayonet so that this event wouldn't have occurred."
I became angry very quickly.
"YOU LITTLE DISEASE-RIDDEN PIECE OF... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!", yelled I.

I tackled him immediately and we had a struggle. I bit him in the shoulder as he attempted to stab me. He screeched and dropped the bayonet. I gave him a couple extra punches and I clawed him in the eye. I finished him off with a strong punch in the throat. He gave a small moan.

"The AK... is in back of cave... please don't kill... me...", he mumbled.

I went to the back of the cave and and found it strategically hidden in a hole just barely big enough to fit it. I pulled it out and turned around. Zoroastrian was inches from my face.

"Vengeance... is so sweet... you abandoned us, you traitor. Prepare to..."

An arrow flew and lodged in his neck. Some black blood oozed from the wound before he fell to the ground and died.

"You're welcome in advance, Dogman. I'm Chuck. Nice to meet ya.", said a human.
"I'm Ishmael. Thank you for saving my life. Please don't kill me."
"I wouldn't even think about it. The fact that ya haven't shot me with that AK yet tells me that you're not hostile."
"Well, thank you. Where are you going? Why are you here?"
"Well, I'm going to Genesis because of the robot. I want it because I think that I'd be the only one that'd use it in a method that wouldn't benefit either side's genocidal campaign. I'm here because I heard some fighting and I thought that it would be a good idea to investigate."
"Huh. Where are you from?"
"I'm from a forest in Colorado. I live by myself, kinda."
"Well, ok. I'm interested in destroying the robot for a similar reason."
"Say, in this day of time, I feel that it would be best to have an ally for a journey like this. Would you be my ally?"
"Sure. But if I get to the robot first, it'll be destroyed.", I warned Chuck.
"And if I get to the robot first, it'll be mine.", he replied.

We looked at each other with squinted eyes for a moment.

"So do we have a deal?", I inquired.
"You better believe it. You have yourself a Queequeg.", he replied.

We departed from the cave.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 07:24 pm »
In order to get more non-humans, I won't be accepting "human" for a couple of applications.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 12, 2012, 06:13 pm »
Posted By: alexturner2002Name in story: Micheal
Weapon: Water Sword
Secondary Item: Grenades
Power: Can summon huge waves of water
Specialty: Weapon master
Good, Evil or Neutral: Good
Species: Human


Accepted.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 11, 2012, 09:18 pm »
Posted By: Xploder9000
Posted By: etxbear
Posted By: alexturner2002Name in story: Micheal
Weapon: RailGun
Secondary Item: Grenades
Power: Can summon huge waves of water
Specialty: Weapon master
Good, Evil or Neutral: Good
Species: Human


Change your weapon.

Posted By: Xploder9000Name in Story: Volt
Weapon: Electricity power
Secondary Item: Giant Shocking sword of the storm
Power: Can Stun people with shock waves (or in contact and his moves) and has a resistance of electricity, light and fire
Specialty: Storm controlling
Neutral (He usualy attacks anyone who is on his sight)
Species: Human


You change your weapon too.
Better? just edited. :D


Much better. You could've kept your original secondary item, though. I'll accept it either way.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 11, 2012, 05:20 pm »
Posted By: alexturner2002Name in story: Micheal
Weapon: RailGun
Secondary Item: Grenades
Power: Can summon huge waves of water
Specialty: Weapon master
Good, Evil or Neutral: Good
Species: Human


Change your weapon.

Posted By: Xploder9000Name in Story: Volt
Weapon: Electricity power
Secondary Item: Giant Shocking sword of the storm
Power: Can Stun people with shock waves (or in contact and his moves) and has a resistance of electricity, light and fire
Specialty: Storm controlling
Neutral (He usualy attacks anyone who is on his sight)
Species: Human


You change your weapon too.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 10, 2012, 07:36 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBump so that people can apply.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 10, 2012, 07:02 pm »
Bump so that people can apply.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 07, 2012, 11:15 am »
Bump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 07, 2012, 08:13 am »
Bumpeth

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 10:54 pm »
I was getting tired as I was writing it. Forgive me if there are any grammar mistakes or if it seems inconsistent or whatever.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 09:08 pm »
--Alex--

I hate this war between the Genesis Freaks and humans. No good is coming from it.

I'm not a talkative fellow, so I'll keep it short and sweet. Humans are flawed and scared. Genesis Freaks are flawed and scared. I don't see why we can't just get along. I moved to the swamp to avoid the fighting, but there's so many Reptilians around here. I have the occasional fight with them, but we've learned to live with one another. The only friend I have down here is a Reptilian named Jack. He's a swell guy, and we share views on many things, like how amazing it is that we can get along so well, and yet, there's a war between humans and Genesis Freaks that's been going on for 2 years, and now there's a skirmish over a hidden experiment that can be controlled.

Where's the love? The morals? The recognition that both man and creature have feelings and a mutual fear of death? The Genesis Freaks are sentient too! Why can't other humans see that? I think I'll run up to Genesis Labs and take that thing and put it somewhere else.

--Jack--

I'm a Reptilian, and I don't talk much. I'll be quick.

This war? It's ridiculous. It's a bigoted war between two evils. Now there's a smaller war between the same parties for a robot. Humans want it to commit genocide, and my fellow Genesis Experiments want it to commit genocide as well! I think I'll go there and activate it. I think I'll give it free will. A life of it's own.

--Hax--

I'm a human, yea, and I hate those freaks as much as the next guy. They're abominations, They were made by evil people who wanted to play God.

Now, I hate those freaks, but I'm not getting involved in the war without some pay. What's in it for me? I live away from them. I only see them on missions and assassinations. There's this fight over a robot in Genesis now. I've been paid to get it for the humans, and I'll do it, but it'll belong to only one human: me. I was paid in advance on this one because it's a dangerous one, so I have my money already. Now, I have to get my special tip.

--Mrez--

I'm an Elf. I'm an Elf, and I'm proud of it! GENESIS EXPERIMENTS ARE SUPERIOR TO THOSE INFERIOR SWINE!

I'm one of the few Elves out there. Elves are the only Genesis Experiments that can blend in with humans. This is a valuable characteristic, for this is very useful for getting important intel. I'm renowned for my sorcery with time and marksmanship with pistols. The humans discovered that there's a chamber in Genesis that has a secret experiment that's a robot. It's supposed to be deadly, but nobody really knows how deadly. The humans were looking through recovered records. I leaked the info to the Genesis Masters and they were just as interested as the humans. There's this fight over it, but nobody knows where the chamber is. All that anybody knows is that the chamber is only accessible from inside Genesis. The humans are getting cl'oser than ever to finding out where the entrance to the chamber is, and the humans put me on the team to find out where it is.

The Genesis Masters are very pleased.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 09:08 pm »
Chapter 1

--Ishmael--

You may ask if this is Earth. The answer is yes, but not the Earth you know.

Welcome to Post-Apocalyptia.

Call me Ishmael. I like the sound of the name from the book "Moby-D'ick". Don't expect a Queequeg or anything in this fable, though. I'm quite the antisocial.

You see, I am a Dogman, a freak product of the horrific experiments of Genesis Labs, a company that was paid by the US Government to research the creation of a "Supersoldier" by creating different creatures built for war and seeing if they were good enough. Genesis Labs also researched other means of Biological Warfare and even developed some chemical weapons. Genesis Labs was an evil corporation that ignored ethics and morals. They were about to terminate the Dogman Project, which would involve the cruel and crude slaughter of every single Dogman alive, because we were to smart. You'd think that'd be a good thing, but the smarter you are, the more you think for yourself, which means revolts and disobedience were a very real possibility. I found out about this and told my brethren, and we rebelled and released every single creature in the building. We got revenge and we escaped.

I was content with just the slaughter of the scientists and other faculty of Genesis Labs, but others were out for vengeance against humanity as a whole. This caused a war between humanity and the "Genesis Freaks", as we were called. Out of the Genesis Experiments, there were the Dogmen, which is what I am, Reptilians, which are crosses between a human and a crocodile or alligator, Infected Ones, which are animal-like humans that can transmit their condition to their offspring through a disease (it's a bit complex), Elves, which are basically humans, but enhanced, and many others.

I stayed hidden from anybody out there that was human, for they all would shoot me on sight. I lived in a cave in Arizona, where I read many books from someone's Amazon Kindle and worked on an AK-47. I learned to hunt. I almost died at the hands of a Hershey Kiss. I lived a lonely life.

Now there's some fight over some hidden experiment that's in Genesis Labs. It's supposed to be a programmable robot. Humans want control so that they can kill off the Genesis Experiments, and the Genesis Experiments want control so that they can kill off the humans. Lovely, isn't it? A war for a weapon to be used in a bigger war. I think I'll go over and destroy it.

--Chuck--

I'm Chuck, and I'm the only human that the Genesis Experiments won't touch.

They're afraid of sorcery, I tell ya. It seems that they're very superstitious. My mirror can create a small clone army of me. My clones can be altered by it, too. I have an army of Super-Chucks at my disposal! HAHAHA I LOVE IT!

The war has driven me to a sane state of insanity. I know this because I still have my morals, but the temptation to run down the street and knock hats off of people's heads is almost too powerful to ignore or suppress. I feel that the best course of action for the safety of my fellow barbaric man is to live in the forest and live like a hobo, but in trees. I get free food thanks to my bow and arrow and abundant wild game, free protection thanks to my mirror, free water thanks to the local lake, free shelter thanks to the trees, and no criticism from anybody thanks to the lack of people here.

There's a new fight over some untouched robo-experiment in Genesis Labs. Genesis Experiments want it. Humans want it. I think I'll go over and take it for myself...

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 08:24 pm »
Posted By: Sonicdude102when will you start writing??


I'm doing it right now on another tab.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 08:19 pm »
Posted By: sportsdude105Name in Story:Hax
Weapon: Sentry Grenade Launcher
Secondary Item:Sword
Power:Elements (Fire,wind,earth.air.)
Specialty:Computer Tech
Good, Evil or Neutral:Neutral
Species: How about a Assassin


Assassin is a job, not a creature or species, so I'm afraid that you'll get the default, which is human.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 06, 2012, 07:56 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBadump


I'll write Chapter 1 soon.

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