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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: May 06, 2012, 06:51 pm »
Posted By: chucky12Hello? Where's the chapter?


Unfinished on some paper. When I'm done, I'll type it on here.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: May 05, 2012, 10:36 am »
Posted By: mrezmanETX GET YOUR BUTT OVER HERE AND START WRITING


DO NOT RUSH PERFECTION!

Even though I was gonna write today anyways.

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Name: Alfredo
Age: 44
Destination: London, England
Backstory: A scientist from Mexico City, Alfredo wanted to go to London to see his wife and two kids and to participate in a series of experiments involving architecture.

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The Bunker / [News] Reporter's HQ
« on: April 28, 2012, 07:34 pm »
Posted By: babybuster4ever
Posted By: ravicalesaltOh Dear Lord

Important Notice from: Ravicale

Hello Truths, why are you, whats the baseball for, wait a second... OH NO!!! HE IS BEATING ME IN THE HEAD WITH A BASEBALL AND I CAN NO LONGER REMEMBER ANYTHING. HELP ITS PAINFUL!!! I'M FALLING TO TH-

Moral: Remember, do not tell anyone about how to use the avatar glitch, and don't taunt others with false info on it, thats just being a troll.
rooo0 posted how to on a few pages on the MS


It results with you having the default avatar, but with transparent skin.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 05:34 pm »
Posted By: thewindlordIz I accepted?


Yes.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 12:33 pm »
Reserved for Chapter 4

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 12:32 pm »
Reserved for Chapter 4

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 12:32 pm »
"Anyways, since that day, my genetically identical twin, a witness of the event, has been out to kill me. There was one time where my mom caught him and turned him in, which resulted in having him put in a mental home. My brother, named Horus, trained himself to be able to trick the nurses into thinking he was better, which resulted in his release. Afterwards, he trained himself to be a killing machine and even changed his face through breaking his nose several times and scarring his face. He got several nose surgeries to repair the breaks. He eventually got an "Eye of Horus" tattoo on his forehead and started going by the sobriquet of "Hax". He's still out to get me.", I told.

"Tell me about you and Hax before the event. Did you get along?", asked Ishmael.

"Quite, my friend. We were the best of friends. We would share dreams, thoughts, and emotions often. We even had an idioglossia."

"Is that so? When did you two forget it and move on to English?"

"We never did forget it, but we began learning English at the age of 4 and became fluent like another child of our age at 7. We retained our idioglossia because we used it more often than English, for we only hung out with each other."

"Do you guys ever use it when you see each other?"

"Uh... when we talk about how we're going to mutilate one another..."

"Right. Um...-"

"ISHMAEL, let's talk about you! Let's be serious this time and not talk about that Nazi mumbo jumbo.", I requested.


Ishmael

"Good idea. Well, since I was a child, I was raised by humans. I had no mother, for I was held in a cloning cell until it was time for me to be released. I was injected with many strength-boosting serums regularly, which damaged my brain severely. I used to be quite the intellectual, but us Dogmen weren't meant for intelligence or to think freely; we were meant to be bloodthirsty, patriotic soldiers, and bloodthirsty we were. One night, I gathered all the Dogmen and we planned a rebellion. We lusted for freedom, but we knew that we were outnumbered by the humans.

So we got the other experiments on board, so not only were the humans outnumbered, they were also quite outmatched.

On March 7, 2014, we rebelled. We were victorious, and we set up a camp on the outskirts of the labs. That camp moved to White Sands National Park after taking what they could from Genesis Labs and became Genesis City. I was the leader of Genesis City for a while until the people wanted to kill off the rest of humanity. I didn't want to kill more humans, for I felt that we killed enough and I wanted a fresh start as someone intellectual and peaceful. I was eventually exiled from power and this violent Zoroastrian cult rose to power promoting the genocide of humanity. I moved away and decided to stay away from Genesis City for the rest of my life, a decision I'm going to have to go against if I want to get the GPS coordinates to Genesis Labs.", I told Chuck.

"Interesting. Well, I'm gonna go hit the sack. See ya in the morning.", said Chuck.

"Yes, see you in the morning.", I replied.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 12:32 pm »
Chapter 4

--Chuck--

Ishmael looked unsure as to what he might expect to hear from me. After all, this moment is an odd one.

"Go on...", said Ishmael.

I tried to put the words together in my head. It was a hard thing to do. I felt that many things were impossible to express in words.

"Ok, I'll start with my childhood.", said I.

Ishmael looked at me with interest.

"Well, one day, when I was 10, I suddenly became very hungry. I ate and ate and ate. I would eat anything and everything I found edible: grass, tree bark, bugs, et cetera. I tried so hard not to eat anybody. I almost became cannibalistic. When it was lunch time, I ate as much as I could. I stole people's entire lunch trays and consumed all of the food on there. Around the end of the day in the middle of class, I had an unbearable stomach pain. I fell to the floor and curled in a fetal position. I was moaning so loudly that an ambulance was called. When the men got to my classroom, they attack me. There were three of them. One had a gun to keep the teacher and other students away, and the other two had small, one-handed baseball bat-like things. Each one of the two had one, and they kept beating me. I've never felt so much pain in my life."

I paused for a moment to let Ishmael process the information he heard.

"I became very scared. Scared for my life, my parents, my siblings, my pet goldfish... It overwhelmed me to the point where I fought back. I released some violent form of energy that made the attackers stop for a moment. One of them dropped their melee weapon. i picked it up and started to return the favor. It seemed that the more I hit the original owner in the head, the more... powerful I became. I eventually bashed his skull in with the weapon."

"Gruesome.", Ishmael commented.

"Indeed, my friend. The others were still on the ground and the students, along with the teacher, were literally moving in extreme slow-motion. I then assumed that I slowed time down due to the release of the violent energy. I wanted time to return to its original speed, and it did as soon as I wanted it to. The other attackers arose, behaving as if they were dizzy. I wanted time to freeze, and it did, which I found convenient. I walked up to the attacker with the gun and hit the man repeatedly in the crotch, rib-cage, and attempted to hit the head, but I was unsuccessful, for I was too short. I backed away and resumed time. The man fell to the ground, yelling and screaming. He relaxed his grip on the gun, which I picked up and used to kill both men."

"Sounds like a fun childhood. Mine consisted of being injected with chemicals and diseases.", Ishmael said.

"What is this? A contest?", I asked.

Ishmael shrugged.

--To be continued (I got kicked off)--

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 11:12 am »
Posted By: thewindlordJust wondering, but would it be a crime to change my character around a little?


Not yet. Your character hasn't been introduced yet.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 28, 2012, 10:07 am »
Posted By: etxbearBadump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 06:38 pm »
Posted By: mrezman
Posted By: etxbear
Posted By: mrezman
Posted By: etxbear
Posted By: mrezmanYes! Awesome! I love Chuck's laugh XD
And I'm so badass :D


I'm glad that you liked it.
This is one of my favorite Sploder stories, actually.


:DDD


















HOLY JESUS I'M HAPPEH














:DDDDDDDDDDDD
You're welcome =)


You've just given me a reason to write besides "I have nothing better to do". Thanks.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 06:29 pm »
Posted By: mrezman
Posted By: etxbear
Posted By: mrezmanYes! Awesome! I love Chuck's laugh XD
And I'm so badass :D


I'm glad that you liked it.
This is one of my favorite Sploder stories, actually.


:DDD


















HOLY JESUS I'M HAPPEH














:DDDDDDDDDDDD

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 06:17 pm »
Posted By: mrezmanYes! Awesome! I love Chuck's laugh XD
And I'm so badass :D


I'm glad that you liked it.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 06:05 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBadump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 05:31 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBadump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 27, 2012, 03:56 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBadump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 26, 2012, 09:06 pm »
Badump

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 26, 2012, 10:48 am »
OH MAH GAWD!

WHY DO I GET SO MANY HUMANS? WHY DO I GET SO MANY GOOD GUYS?

Posted By: mrezmanY No Moar Coming out???


There shall be more today.

Posted By: thewindlordName in Story:Zaren
Weapon: Bow (And Arrow's, or course)
Secondary Item (can be weapon or other): Long, deadly katana
Power: Control over storm's
Specialty: Fighting
Good, Evil or Neutral:Good
Species: Human


*deep breath*

Accepted.

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Posted By: dormin3423Private

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 24, 2012, 08:06 pm »
Posted By: sportsdude105Me next chapter.


I'll put you in where I need you.

--

When people will appear:

Pey - Possibly Chapter 3, but probably Chapter 4; it'll be worth the wait.
Hax - Chapter 3
Trans - See Pey
Michael - Chapter 3
Volt - See Pey
Kaito Hiwajima (Angelo) - Chapter 3
Alex - Unlikely (yet possibly) in Chapter 3, Chapter 4 probably, if not then Chapter 5
Jack - See Alex

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 23, 2012, 05:36 pm »
Posted By: etxbearBump for applicants

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 23, 2012, 05:12 pm »
Bump for applicants

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General / Song Rating Thread (The oringial)
« on: April 21, 2012, 02:39 pm »
Here's a few more:

The Theft - Atreyu
Rollin' - Limp Bizkit

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General / Song Rating Thread (The oringial)
« on: April 21, 2012, 12:03 pm »
I have a big list, so I'll give you five songs at random.

Sugar - SOAD
Inside the Fire - Disturbed
Coming Undone - KoRn
When Worlds Collide - Powerman 5000
Dragula - Rob Zombie

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 20, 2012, 08:14 pm »
Chapter 3

--Mrez--

I was walking through an abandoned town when I found it.

It was an armored sports car, and it was destined to be mine.

I picked it open and hot-wired it. It turned on.

"Oh yea. Look at this.", I said to myself.

I looked through a few CD cases in the car and found 90's rock and rock-esque CDs. I was pleased, for I'm a fan of this type of music. Don't tell anyone. I put a Powerman 5000 CD in and played "When Worlds Collide". Just when I did this, a small gang of 4 humans approached the car from small alleys a distance away.

One caught my eye. His name was Hax, and he was an assassin. I looked  behind me and found a small signature grenade bomb that could've only been made by Hax himself. From past experience, I pulled a wire out and it deactivated. I then turned around, put on my seatbelt, turned up the music, and floored it.

I took a matter of seconds for me to catch up with them. They jumped out of the way, but I was lucky and I hit one in the leg.

"AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! MY LEG!!!!!!," I barely heard the crippled victim say.

Out of pure cruelty and self-pleasure, I went in reverse. I "accidently" turned the wheel a bit and crushed his skull. The vague screaming stopped. It must've happened so fast that the 3 others were too scared to do anything. One man, a pimp-looking sir, ran away with a cane. The other two, Hax and an unnamed human, were somewhat frightened, but brave enough to fight an elf in an armored sports car, as opposed to A Pimp Named Slickback.

I killed the engine and got out. I wanted to have fun.

I pulled out my two pistols and said to Hax, "Come at me, bro."

He pulled out his sword and ran after me. His friend went after me with a sword as well.

I shot the friend and ran after Hax. The friend fell to the ground with a bullet in his brain. I shot at Hax, but he was quick enough to deflect the bullet with his sword. We were close. I shot his hand and he dropped his sword. I then hit him on his head and he fell on his knees.

"Why do you want me dead?", I asked Hax.
"Personal business.", he replied.
"Personal business? Ha. Ha! HA! PERSONAL BUSINESS?! HAHAHAHA! LET ME SHOW YOU PERSONAL BUSINESS!", I yelled at Hax.

--Ishmael--

"So, tell me about yourself, Ishmael. If I'm gonna travel with ya, I gotta know ya.", said Chuck.
"Well, I'm a 23-year-old body builder. I like long walks on the beach, sunsets, and drawing swastikas. Heil Hitler!", I jokingly replied.
Chuck looked at me with a puzzled face. I think he wasn't sure if I was joking or serious.
"I'm joking, Chuck. I wasn't serious."
He relaxed and laughed so hard that I wasn't sure if he was just laughing hard or if he was having an asthma attack. He was laughing so long that he ran out of air and was laughing somewhat silently. Eventually, he was just twitching with a smile on his face. It was disturbing.

Then, I smelled sweet smoke. It was the smell of a Genesis Fire Temple.

"CHUCK! ARISE! GENESIS EXPERIMENTS ARE COMING!", yelled I.
He arose.
"Follow me. Slowly.", I instructed.

He obeyed. We walked to a boulder and hid behind it. We observed the ongoing situation.

"...so that's why I don't give a splode about your life, human! Now, prepare to die!", said an elf that was cleverly disguised as a human, which isn't a hard task to do.
A man was sneaking behind the elf. He was holding a cane. When he got close enough, he pulled a sword from his cane.

"SWORD CANE!", he yelled. He charged toward the elf. The elf moved one of his two pistols to the man and pulled the trigger. It was so quick, I almost didn't know what happened. The elf never moved his head to look behind him. The man fell to the ground with a bullet wound perfectly positioned between his two eyes.

Chuck aimed his bow and arrow at the elf. Chuck released the arrow which was also shot at by the elf. The bullet hit the arrow right at the tip.

This time, the elf turned his head. He saw Chuck and I.

"ISHMAEL! I SEE YOU! YOU'RE A TRAITOR!", yelled the elf.
"And you are?!", I yelled back.
"I AM MREZ! I DON'T APPRECIATE THIS UNFAIR FIGHT! 3 AGAINST 1 IS IMPOSSIBLE, EVEN FOR ME!"
"Run along before we test your hypothesis and prove it correct!", yelled I.

He looked down at the human and then back at us.

"He's yours!", Mrez yelled. Mrez sprinted away so fast that not even the most skilled marksman with the most precise gun could hit him.

"Thank you!" the human shouted. "It's not every day that a genesis helps a human!"
"You're welcome! I'm Ishmael! Who are you?", I replied.
"I'm Hax! Nice to meet you and your friend!"

Chuck looked at him with a worried face.

"What's the problem?", I asked Chuck.

Chuck turned at me slowly and said, "He's an assassin. He's out for someone. I bet that it's me."
"Why would that be?", I asked Chuck.
Chuck said, "I think that I should tell you about me now."

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Posted By: NellacPrivate.

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Posted By: Dale18Private


Private

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 15, 2012, 06:39 pm »
Finished with Chapter 2.

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General / My Sploder Story (Chapter 4 completed on Page 3)
« on: April 15, 2012, 02:48 pm »
Posted By: mrezmanWRITE. MOAR. NAO. *runs around whacking a cane*


I'm working on the part of the chapter that your character narrates right now.

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