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Your analysis and style is sound, but you should learn to articulate yourself more elegantly. At times your poor wording interrupts the flow of the review. Aside from this, I look forward to seeing more reviews from you.

As far as I can see, there isn't a rule against modifying your application before it's accepted. However, I wouldn't take the risk just to be safe. At least next time you write a review, whether this one gets accepted or not, you'll be aware of this. :)

I don't think the things I mentioned would be enough to get you denied as long as your analysis is good enough anyway. Again, I wish you luck! :D
The old rules were that you could not edit a review once a recruiter had given feedback (in this case you are not a recruiter). I would recommend that Apod edits it while saving a backup of the original review so that he can reupload the original if his editing is deemed foul play.

You use "design" a lot in reference to different things, which can be confusing. But the format was unique and suited the game you reviewed, good luck!

I have run recruitment in the past and I have released 3 reviews including my application.

i am going to wait. probably like 5 - 6 months?
2 weeks is the usual experience requirement to become a reviewer recruiter. As long as you can review and critique reviews, you will be accepted quite easily.

MSM and Editor Recruitement / Re: Meta's Editor Recruitment Inc.
« on: January 20, 2019, 08:41 am »
MS Username: seanthechinaman
Number of Features: 6 (on past accounts)
Best Review (if applicable): my reviewer application

What makes you qualified for the position: I already have experience as an Editor, and during my career I discovered unknown game creators such as cheesegrater1 and brought their games into the spotlight. This is what an Editor is for, to reward and encourage the production of great games, keeping "Where games come true" true.

In addition I understand the other responsibilities an Editor has, and I will happily take requests and critique games from any Sploder member, while other Editors may consider this a burden.

What you have done recently to show you are worthy of the position: I am currently invested in revitalizing mainsite activity, and so I search for interesting new games (and comments) daily.

And of course I have written two reviews recently that are both critical and fair to the game makers. These are two qualities an Editor should uphold, as to keep a high feature standard without discouraging Sploder members. Editors will often dwell too far into either oppressive strictness or anarchic generosity, balance must be kept.

General / Re: why the sploder discord sucks
« on: January 19, 2019, 06:11 pm »
the best thing that ever happened to my hero academia
I hate when romanians watch anime. Keep to your own cartoons please.

I really don’t know if you had a previous username so idk
It's in my signature fool.

Mod, Reviewer.


General / Re: why the sploder discord sucks
« on: January 19, 2019, 05:56 pm »
What's toga?

Music / Small rappers vs tall rappers?
« on: January 18, 2019, 04:04 pm »
Which are better?

General / Re: What are some of your insecurities?
« on: January 18, 2019, 03:11 pm »
I'm beautiful, but my hair looks like that of a peasant currently. I need to shave it all off. I need more clothes too but molt pobre.

well expected and contrived both end with ed but I don't know
The -ed in contrived is barely even pronounced whereas the -ed in expected is pronounced "tid". They do not rhyme at all.

General / Re: In your opinion, what are the worst fanbases?
« on: January 18, 2019, 10:34 am »
White Supremacy
Agreed. But Beliebers are cool.

contrived doesn't fit here at all it just rhymes and makes me sound smart and sophisticated
It doesn't rhyme with anything you said.

General / Re: Only Black People Can Open This Thread
« on: January 17, 2019, 04:33 am »
My N word pass ran out i was on a 2 week trial please do you know any african americans i need the pass i cant be cool without it please dude
You've made the list.

General / Re: Only Black People Can Open This Thread
« on: January 17, 2019, 04:22 am »
I've seen you say it before you lying rat.

Music / Re: Rate the music above you
« on: January 17, 2019, 01:41 am »
-10/10 - this is a better menu screen song

Music / Re: Rate the music above you
« on: January 17, 2019, 12:53 am »

Well what's the now 28-hour excuse
Are you talking about your sent application or your initial "i want a application" message?

I haven't gotten a reply to my pm from 24 hours ago and just now I realized I have to state it here
You don't have to state anything here.

Game Discussion / Re: Sploder contests ~ 2019
« on: January 13, 2019, 11:23 am »
The thread is quite hard to read with all of the color changes.

Game Discussion / Re: This is what I did all morning...
« on: January 12, 2019, 05:06 pm »

Game Discussion / Re: 2019 FEATURES!!!
« on: January 12, 2019, 04:37 pm »
Since you're not an Editor you can use the Sploder Twitter for the dates of features.

Music / Re: Rate the music above you
« on: January 12, 2019, 04:04 pm »

Game Discussion / Re: This is what I did all morning...
« on: January 12, 2019, 04:02 pm »
Looks great.

The fact that you make threads like this. Believe in yourself.

Reviewer Lane / Re: Fruit Ninja - a review of Melonheads by NPC10000
« on: January 11, 2019, 05:31 pm »
I wish it was a little bit longer and I am slightly confused on if you even discussed the whole game (you mention two levels and imply that there are more levels, I don't care to go play the game myself but it would've been nice if you had clarified!!!)
I apologize if it wasn't clear. The game is comprised of two levels, but the second level has no gameplay and simply deposits the origin of the story onto you through text, so I focused on the first level, which actually had content.

Also thanks for the approval.

Music / Re: Rate the music above you
« on: January 11, 2019, 11:42 am »
5/10 - cool music video but... :-X

Music / Re: Rate the music above you
« on: January 11, 2019, 10:12 am »
4/10 - this has a hilarious beat

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