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Music / My Band
« on: March 02, 2019, 10:23 am »
Hey, so I'm just gonna straight up plug my psych-rock band haha
We're currently a three-piece and playing gigs in our local area, I'm the guitarist/vocalist/songwriter.
Hope you like it, feedback would be really appreciated.

General / Photo of me dressed for prom.
« on: June 20, 2013, 03:45 pm »
Everyone was saying how cool I looked! :3 Self esteem level just went from nil to 'Exists'. We had limo's etc....

Me and my mates requested some dubstep and nirvana. But my neck is gonna be a pain in the morning after all the headbanging too. Heres the photo of me:


General / What concert did you go to last?
« on: June 15, 2013, 10:08 am »
Mine was 'Kiss'.


« on: June 13, 2013, 05:27 pm »

General / Induction day
« on: June 13, 2013, 03:15 am »
Anybody have it?

General / Uhhhh, Amdri's getting a bit!
« on: June 12, 2013, 02:23 pm »
He's begging me to show him the nude pic. You know, the one Zfamily posted. Help! please

Personal Exhibition / What music genre are you?
« on: June 11, 2013, 05:29 pm »

General / Wow......
« on: June 11, 2013, 03:39 pm »

They're there. I'm just not scrolling.

General / "I'm so happy, because today I found my friends,
« on: June 10, 2013, 05:27 pm »
They're in my head, I'm so ugly, thats okay coz so are you.
We've broken mirrors."

My theme tune.

General / Time for a sing along!
« on: June 09, 2013, 05:27 pm »
I hurt myself today.....

General / *Watches hangover 3*
« on: June 09, 2013, 05:14 pm »
*Mr Chow sings Hurt by Nine inch nails*


General / A book I'm starting to write.....
« on: June 01, 2013, 06:18 pm »
She's gone. Just like that. Forever. Y'know those moments when you wish something never happened so you could start from the beginning? I've felt like that since the day she died. It was in a car incident. Yeah, incident. It was on purpose. Some guy decided he wanted to commit suicide...on the road we were driving on. She turned the wheel. It was in the afternoon. We were in the middle of no where. The country side. No cars, no people. Just a ditch at the side of the road. He jumped in front of the car. She turned the wheel and we spun into the ditch. Everything slowed down for a second. The glass slowly edged towards me. Spinning. It cut straight into my eye. My other eye was still intact. I looked towards her. My head wasn't thinking about the car, my eye or my life. Just her. For some reason every part of my body focused on her. We crashed into a tree. A thin wooden stick was shoved into her heart. She lurched forwards and spat blood. The everything sped up again. The air bag came up and hit me in the face. I was knocked out. Next thing I know I'm in a hospital. They didn't tell me about her. Not until later on. They made sure I was okay and that I could walk. They told me about my eye. It was umm....still in my head but I couldn't see through it. I didn't need an eye patch for this. When I was stable they told me about her. Grace, my wife was killed in a fatal accident. She was instantly killed when it entered her body. Her last moments. I watched her last moments. She didn't deserve to die that way. They also told me the guy who jumped in front of the car has gone missing. Sometimes I ask myself why it couldn't have been me. People say things happen for a reason. What good could come out of this? When you lose something precious you realise how little you really have.

I got in my car and cried. That's what I seem to do every day now. For a second I forget about her. For a second I'm happy. Then I remember. Her face, the glass and the tree. Maybe if she'd turned the wheel in the other direction this wouldn't have happened. I can't blame anybody. She couldn't face killing anybody. Which is why she turned. Why? It wouldn't have mattered. It was exactly what he wanted. Thats everyday for me. Work, cry, sleep. Like a machine. I'm just strapped in a chair. With someone taunting me with images of the only thing I cared about. Everyday I go to the graveyard. Alone. I stare at her name. Written in stone. The stone means something to me. Like I can't change it. It'll be like that forever. Then I look down at the floor and realise that I'm standing in front of Grace's dead body. I don't know why but I but for some reason I feel responsible. Lie there was something I could have done, or should've done. But I need to carry on with my job.

October 6th

I walk into work. And Danny comes to me. He's uh, my assistant. He's also the only guy who know about Grace in the whole department. I guess I felt I could trust him. He seemed to understand how I feel. But most of the time he tries not to bring it up. “Hey man! Hows it going?” He had a pile of paperwork in his hand. It was all filled in. He was probably going to hand it in to the boss. Oh his name is Callum. He's cool but a bit of an splode at other times. “Great, well has great as it gets.” He gave me a look. A look of understanding. “Well I've just got to hand this in. Once that's done. Me and you have got a job to do.” He started walking down the office. “Whats that?” I asked as I followed him.
“Its not nice. Victims of rape. One dead and one shocked.”
“Yeah, he did one of the girls, Cassie, and the other one tried to call the cops. He stabbed her.”
“I know right? I guess theres just some messed up people round here.”
“Or just people who messed up.” He stopped and looked at me. Then he took me into his office. He sat down made himself some coffee and started having a deep speech about how it wasn't my fault. I wasn't really listening to his crap. I just started staring at things. I've been doing that lately. Ever since the crash I've been doing a of day dreaming. Maybe I hit my head. “Bobby? Bobby? Bobby?!” My eyes darted back to Dan,
“Do you understand?” I hesitated. “Uhh yeah.” He put down his empty mug. Had he been talking for that long? He handed in the papers and we got ready to go.

We arrived at the victims house. Rape was always a hard one when trying to talk to the victims. As I walked towards the door I heard crying. I walked in and saw one of the cops trying to calm her down. He eye-liner was running down her face.
“Can I talk to you?” She looked up at me. “Its about the incident.” She stood up. And stared at me. Then she picked up a lamp and hit me with it. “WHY WEREN'T YOU THERE?! WHY!? YOU HAVE ONE SIMPLE JOB AND THAT WAS TO PROTECT ME AND YOU FAILED!” Dan grabbed her and started taking her out of the room “YOU STUPID, GAH I HATE YOU! I HOPE YOU DIE IN HELL YOU STUPID MOTHERF-” The door slammed shut. I talk this half an hour to look round her apartment for clues. A family photo on the floor. She probably hit him with this. I looked in her living room. Nothing interesting in there. Then the bedroom. I was afraid to look considering what happend here. Nothing much actually. More toppled over things from where she'd tried to resist. The I looked in the kitchen and saw the forensic team. A body in a bag and a bloody knife to go with it. Brilliant.

I went to talk to her. She told me how he came in at night. Told her friend not to move. Then.....You know. Her friend tried to call the cops so he stabbed her. She gave us a description of a tall man, white, a goatee and blue eyes. I left her there. I felt like I should've done something more. But I couldn't have.

Tell me if there's mistakes. And keep in mind this isn't finished yet.

General / I love the new graphic creator!
« on: June 01, 2013, 01:13 pm »
I just made a window with it. It looks awesome. Also we can technically make it so people can drown in the platformer now. Just make a graphic thats the same colour as the water. Then add it on to lava. 

There's so many things to do with it!

« on: May 31, 2013, 12:47 pm »
Look, as the title said, its time to get out of bed, and maybe make a rhyme or two. If you're feeling lazy, or a little bit hazy you should probably go watch some doctor who. Rhyme about this, rhyme about that. You can even rhyme about that guy down the street, Y'know, Mr Prat.

You can have a fight if you're the argumentative type or just explain you're day. I think I should finish here before I can't think of what to say!

General / So I'm starting to write a book.
« on: May 31, 2013, 10:14 am »
I don't know how motivated I'll be to do it but we'll see. Basically its about a guy called Connor who's a cop. He takes a trip to the country side with his wife, Grace. But another guy called Sam tries to commit suicide by jumping in front of the car. Grace turns the wheel to dodge the man but crashes into a tree and part of it sticks into Graces heart. Some of the glass goes into Connors eye and blinds him in...well one of is eyes.

While still angry and upset about the death of his wife he tries to continue with his job. But he's still finding it hard. I tried to focus on the emotional state of Connor and his mental state quite a bit. Basically he catches a criminal and finds out Grace had more significance than he thought. But the case is closed. So Connor has to carry this on alone. However he starts seeing hallucinations and ghosts.

Its (Quite fittingly) called Ghosts. Thoughts?

General / This song reminds me of Geoff.
« on: May 31, 2013, 08:33 am »
I put the Rock band version on since its censored.

General / :D
« on: May 29, 2013, 04:29 pm »

« on: May 29, 2013, 11:32 am »

Personal Exhibition / MAH MUSIC CHAT ROOM
« on: May 29, 2013, 11:08 am »
Well just because I'm an arsehole I made a chatroom for music. I'll play some Rock/Metal/Nu Metal/Punk etc.... Care to join? PM me if you want to request a song!

General / Anybody remember ED hunter?
« on: May 29, 2013, 09:06 am »

General / I'm pissed off and I love it.
« on: May 29, 2013, 08:48 am »
My so called friends betrayed me. I never let myself hate anyone but now I'm seriously pissed. I mean it wasn't the same with Holly. She had a reason and I couldn't blame her. But this arseholes have pissed me off bad. Dedicated to my friendly neighbourhood knob heads

Basically. They kicked me out of my own band. After I wrote an album for them and got them equipment. They just come back and say "Your not good enough." Well they've derped cause I have the songs and the equipment. I'm never normally angry. But now I'm seriously annoyed.

General / Ignore Emily.
« on: May 28, 2013, 03:35 pm »
Just don't reply to any of her posts. Just ignore her.

General / Give me a song an I'll review it.
« on: May 27, 2013, 09:22 am »
I'll most likely give good reviews to Rock/metal and some blues.

General / LOL
« on: May 25, 2013, 12:10 pm »

General / New pic of me.
« on: May 25, 2013, 11:55 am »

(CG, you can use this pic if you want)

General / WW2 moves like jagger parody by me ^_^
« on: May 21, 2013, 02:30 pm »
It starts with the verse (Duh)

So Hitlers plan, was perfect,
just needed a team, to work it.
So on hoped Japan, Italy was a fan, now on with the plan!

Yeah hitlers a massive bum-hole, does not change the fact that he's loco,
You know what screw you Hitler x3
Mussolini's plan, had failed,
Its time for him, to bail,
allies all around, soldiers surround, you have been found,
They say if you cannot beat them, its probably best that you join them,
welcome too the allies x3
Concentration camps, liberated,
Civilization in France, Celebrated.
Hitler wipe off your grin, time to pay for your sin, pressures on him!
If you wanted to be a nice guy, you really shouldn't have shot us at the sea side!
We're gonna get you Hitler, x3
(Kind of verse thing)
You've got to know, and never deny it, hitler wants control, Seems we'll have to fight him,
all the terror we'll make, with the USA's Nuclear tea cake! Hopefully they won't see this!

WW2's not a nice story, with blood and guts 'twas gory,
But hell be beat you hitler x3

To audition for a part in the class production you need to sing a song to prove you're good enough. So, me being me, I sang "Smells like teen spirit"! Apparently I was good because all my friends were singing along. So, YAY.

« on: May 19, 2013, 10:13 am »
Ctrl and Q at the same time. Edward Khil's face comes up!

« on: May 18, 2013, 04:16 pm »

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