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Title: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Blonk on May 26, 2013, 11:45 pm
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3127929/1/THE-TRIGGER (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3127929/1/THE-TRIGGER)


Tell me what you think and what advice you may have for me. :-]


It isn't complete in the slightest as I have only finished two chapters.  If you enjoyed it, you could share it with your friends or whatever.
Title: Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Blonk on May 27, 2013, 12:51 am
bump
Title: Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Brave Boy on May 27, 2013, 12:55 am
cool and good detailed writing
Title: Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Blonk on May 27, 2013, 04:33 am
bump dat shiz
Title: Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Blonk on May 27, 2013, 02:45 pm
bump
Title: Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
Post by: Blonk on May 28, 2013, 12:23 am
No one's interested? :(