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[Denied] Forever alive... but your dead?
« on: June 26, 2013, 07:16 am »
Alright, let's get started. This is a review of Forever Young by The one, The only, Blackhole2!



                                           ~Story~


Well, it turns out that you, Captain Roderick the cruelest and most irritating man in the world. You have been crushed by a train, and have been given another chance by the tree of life. This is different, since you have been given 1 life, because you are rude, if you die you don't revive. Also Dante's out for you, every 10 seconds. I give the story a 8/4 /10



                                              ~Gameplay~

It is very good besides the reappearance of Dante ever minute. A great decorative sense when you fall into Dante's world. The flames, and skulls an excellent idea! It really brings out the beauty of the game in the Hell of Dante with really great placement, and nothing out of place. I give the game-play 9/10 



                                             ~The game itself~


Well, not the best thing iv'e seen, but it's very close. It has i think no Enemies so that's peaceful enough. I think it is awesome in it's own way!
It is the best game by Blackhole2 yet. I give the game itself a 10/10


                                            ~Final thoughts~


It is a great platformer, one of the best. Really great thought on it, it is great tile placement! It is one of the most beautiful game iv'e seen. 9/10



Lag

1/10

Difficulty

10/10

            THAT'S ALL
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Re: [Application] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #1 on: June 26, 2013, 02:51 pm »
Thanks for the review but it's a bit short, isn't it?:s
Well, there're more enemies in the later levels. However nobody can beat level 2 or three which makes me desperate. And when I'm desperate, I'm about to delete something...

Thanks really, I appreaciate that
 

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Re: [Application] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #2 on: June 26, 2013, 03:02 pm »
Denied. 
For fifty and nine he swam along just fine, a mind that’s trained to see, always would know what goes on inside, goes on in me.
 

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Re: [Application] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #4 on: June 26, 2013, 07:36 pm »
Thanks for the review but it's a bit short, isn't it?:s
Well, there're more enemies in the later levels. However nobody can beat level 2 or three which makes me desperate. And when I'm desperate, I'm about to delete something...

Thanks really, I appreaciate that
It is a great game




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Re: [Application] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #5 on: June 26, 2013, 07:42 pm »
Denied.
I know that I'm not a Recruiter, but I'm sure Hungery123456789 would like to know why he got denied; I'm sure he doesn't exactly know why he got denied, so he should know.
 

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Re: [Denied] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #6 on: June 26, 2013, 07:47 pm »
I know that I'm not a Recruiter, but I'm sure Hungery123456789 would like to know why he got denied; I'm sure he doesn't exactly know why he got denied, so he should know.

Yes.




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Re: [Denied] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #7 on: June 26, 2013, 11:41 pm »
The review is sloppy with poor sentence structure to begin.
For fifty and nine he swam along just fine, a mind that’s trained to see, always would know what goes on inside, goes on in me.
 

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Re: [Denied] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #8 on: June 26, 2013, 11:46 pm »
The review is sloppy with poor sentence structure to begin.
What do you mean by "Sloppy?




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Re: [Denied] Forever alive... but your dead?
« Reply #9 on: June 27, 2013, 01:01 am »
It has no flow at all
For fifty and nine he swam along just fine, a mind that’s trained to see, always would know what goes on inside, goes on in me.