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Poetry.
« on: June 25, 2013, 09:53 pm »
Kay, I want you guys if you are willing, whenever you see this thread, I want you to write some poetry.

Poetry that matches your mood, or your problems, or your whole life. I'll give a thank to each poetry that I really like, and I encourage people to do the same if they like a certain poetry.

Here's mine:

Lost away from me with no gain
I try to spare my pain
I look to the mirror and see my own face
I see nothing but sadness, and daze
Hope seems lost to me in my time of need
I can only think of my once promising dreams
Gone to waste along with my happiness and hope
I think, I think, and can only dream of a way to cope.
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #1 on: June 25, 2013, 09:56 pm »
You lost me after Kay.
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #2 on: June 25, 2013, 09:57 pm »
My Poem (Joke)

Freezin', rests his head on a pillow made of concrete, again
Oh, Feelin' maybe he'll see a little better, set a days, ooh yeah
Oh, hand out, faces that he sees time again ain't that familiar, oh yeah
Oh, dark grin, he can't help, when he's happy looks insane, oh yeah
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again
Life again, life again...
Kneelin', looking through the paper though he doesn't know to read, ooh yeah
Oh, prayin', now to something that has never showed him anything
Oh, feelin', understands the weather of the winters on it's way
Oh, ceilings, few and far between all the legal halls of shame, yeah
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again
Whispering hands, gently lead him away
Him away, him away...
Yeah!
Woo... ah yeah... splode it up...
Even flow, thoughts arrive like butterflies
Oh, he don't know, so he chases them away
Someday yet, he'll begin his life again, yeah
Oh, whispering hands, gently lead him away
Him away, him away...
Yeah!
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #3 on: June 25, 2013, 09:57 pm »
@kitty

Did you mean: tl;dr?
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #4 on: June 25, 2013, 09:59 pm »
@kitty

Did you mean: tl;dr?
You lost me at @kitty.
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #5 on: June 25, 2013, 10:03 pm »
I will write haikus

Sorry, but I'm no poet

I can't write haikus
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #6 on: June 25, 2013, 10:03 pm »
I will write haikus

Sorry, but I'm no poet

I can't write haikus
That is a haikus.
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #7 on: June 25, 2013, 10:05 pm »
That is a haikus.

*haiku

Yes, but is it a good haiku?
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 10:05 pm »
My poem:

Look At you Xploder,
Digging Streetlife Chicks,
You the new swagger,
nothing like One Piece Fan Jagger,

I'm a sensation.
I'm a beat.
Give me something.
Something to eat.

Xploder THE LEGEND
(drum roll)
He needs chicks.
Needs chicks.
Needs needs needs needs lots and lots of chicks.
I need a girl.
You pervy,
no srs
I need a girl.

TRY THE INTERNET
TRY THE BOOKS
YOU'RE DATING
SORRY MOM
IM OFF THE HOOK
WITH A GIRL I JUST MET
ONLIIIIIIIIIINNNNNEEEEE

I need chicks.
Need chicks.
Yes lots and lots of
needs chicks.

Girls are everywhere.
Grab a plane.
Eat a bird.
Run down the lane.

I'd get a girl,
if I were you.
Try FFK,
she's pretty and cute.

YEAH YEAH YEAH
OH YEAH YEAH
*dance moves*

OH YEAH
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 10:06 pm »
Sweeping Sorrow in the sweet night
raging rugrats in a rough fight
Beat up bulldogs breaking up
dumb dogs doing drugs in a cup
seven sailors sweeping soon
all will end
every faith dies at noon
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 10:09 pm »
Yo, Esperantists

I am monolingual

I do not like that

EDIT:

Guys, I can not spell

I'm sad; I also can not count

I am so sorry
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #11 on: June 25, 2013, 10:11 pm »
peanut66
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bow down to him now

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #12 on: June 25, 2013, 10:12 pm »
what you want..

baby..

i got it.

what you need.

i know ive got it..

....

but im all im asking is for a little respect

when i get home aight..

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what
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me

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #13 on: June 25, 2013, 10:12 pm »
peanut66
sploder's best grunt ever seen
bow down to him now

haiku

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #14 on: June 25, 2013, 10:16 pm »
Life goes by another day
with not much for me to say
I work and do what I can
so that I am still the man.

Doing nothing or doing much
What have I done? Such and such.
Life feels a bore, yet still so quick.
Thinking about it makes me sick.

I guess I am done with what I can say,
I am done writing for one day.
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #15 on: June 25, 2013, 10:18 pm »
You'll be a great man, you say

But how, without anything?

Sitting, life wasting away

Yes, without anything.

Used to enjoy life and play

No worries about anything?

And yet you can only sit and say

What is left? Anything?

No, there's not, only memories and hopes

What kinds, you ask, anything?

Possibilities that have all eloped

Don't you have anything?

But the reality is you must sit and cope

You do not have anything.

What has happened, you sadly ask

It's all your fault if anything.

In the truth you must bask

All has gone that was anything.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #16 on: June 25, 2013, 10:18 pm »
If you said “Nice day,” he would look up
 at the three clouds riding overhead,
 nod at each, and go back to doing what-
 ever he was doing or not doing.
 If you asked for a smoke or a light,
 he’d hand you whatever he found
 in his pockets: a jackknife, a hankie –
 usually unsoiled — a dollar bill,
 a subway token. Once he gave me
 half the sandwich he was eating
 at the little outdoor restaurant
 on La Guardia Place. I remember
 a single sparrow was perched on the back
 of his chair, and when he held out
 a piece of bread on his open palm,
 the bird snatched it up and went back to
 its place without even a thank you,
 one hard eye staring at my bad eye
 as though I were next. That was in May
 of ’97, spring had come late,
 but the sun warmed both of us for hours
 while silence prevailed, if you can call
 the blaring of taxi horns and the trucks
 fighting for parking and the kids on skates
 streaming past silence. My friend Frankie
 was such a comfort to me that year,
 the year of the crisis. He would turn
 up his great dark head just going gray
 until his eyes met mine, and that was all
 I needed to go on talking nonsense
 as he sat patiently waiting me out,
 the bird staring over his shoulder.
 “Silence is silver,” my Zaydee had said,
 getting it wrong and right, just as he said
 “Water is thicker than blood,” thinking
 this made him a real American.
 Frankie was already American,
 being half German, half Indian.
 Fact is, silence is the perfect water:
 unlike rain it falls from no clouds
 to wash our minds, to ease our tired eyes,
 to give heart to the thin blades of grass
 fighting through the concrete for even air
 dirtied by our endless stream of words.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #17 on: June 25, 2013, 10:27 pm »
I feel alone in my own home
Perpetual night with a new moon
I've learned how to act
Sorrow's might made my sight skew
People are nothing but scat

^As I said, I'm not a poet.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #18 on: June 25, 2013, 10:28 pm »
I wrote this in my graduation.
The chicks dig me for this xD

Well you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go
 
Staring at the bottom of your glass
Hoping one day you'll make a dream last
But dreams come slow and they go so fast
You see her when you close your eyes
Maybe one day you'll understand why
Everything you touch surely dies
 
But you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
 
Staring at the ceiling in the dark
Same old empty feeling in your heart
'Cause love comes slow and it goes so fast
Well you see her when you fall asleep
But never to touch and never to keep
'Cause you loved her too much and you dive too deep
 
Well you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go
Oh oh oh no
And you let her go
Oh oh oh no
Well you let her go
 
'Cause you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
 
'Cause you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #19 on: June 25, 2013, 10:29 pm »
I hate poetry
splode haikus and splode you too
Aint post no poem
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #20 on: June 25, 2013, 10:30 pm »
swag one million
swag one hundred trillion
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #21 on: June 25, 2013, 10:31 pm »
I sang the song in this vid I made..

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #22 on: June 25, 2013, 10:34 pm »
My hair is so wet
I'm willing to make a bet
I waste my life on this site
It makes me stay up all night
Now I'm writing this crappy poem
And I know who will read it: No one.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #23 on: June 25, 2013, 10:36 pm »
I wrote this in my graduation.
The chicks dig me for this xD

Well you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go
 
Staring at the bottom of your glass
Hoping one day you'll make a dream last
But dreams come slow and they go so fast
You see her when you close your eyes
Maybe one day you'll understand why
Everything you touch surely dies
 
But you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
 
Staring at the ceiling in the dark
Same old empty feeling in your heart
'Cause love comes slow and it goes so fast
Well you see her when you fall asleep
But never to touch and never to keep
'Cause you loved her too much and you dive too deep
 
Well you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go
Oh oh oh no
And you let her go
Oh oh oh no
Well you let her go
 
'Cause you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
 
'Cause you only need the light when it's burning low
Only miss the sun when it starts to snow
Only know you love her when you let her go
Only know you've been high when you're feeling low
Only hate the road when you're missing home
Only know you love her when you let her go
And you let her go

You're a pretty good songwriter.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #24 on: June 25, 2013, 10:36 pm »
You're a pretty good songwriter.

So what? I published it on a site. Guys copy my work. >.>
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #25 on: June 25, 2013, 10:37 pm »
Btw Chicks dig me big time.
 

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #26 on: June 25, 2013, 10:37 pm »
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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #27 on: June 25, 2013, 10:38 pm »
I honestly just can't rhyme.
It's just not worth my time.
Why should I try?
I'm not gonna cry.
But it could also be a crime.

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Re: Poetry.
« Reply #28 on: June 25, 2013, 10:39 pm »
guys y are you hating on xploder hes the best poet ever
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