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Offline peytonfire123

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My new song I wrote
« on: June 19, 2013, 11:09 pm »
It's called actress tell me how you like it

Ya she was an actress like right off a movie scene
She walked like an actress walking the red carpet were she belonged
She talked an actress getting interviewed for a magazine
She walked right up to me and gave me a kiss
I thought I was gonna miss
I was nervous because she was an
Actress like right off a movie scene
She walked like an actress on the red carpet were she belonged
She talked like an actress getting an interview for a magazine
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Re: My new song I wrote
« Reply #1 on: June 20, 2013, 03:08 am »
Meh, doesn't really rhyme. You should write truthful songs. Thats what many popular artists do.