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When he gets on...
HE WILL MAKE A NEW CHAPTER.
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where is the next chapter
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Chapter 6 - The storm clouds roll in

Worn out from his battle with Aeron, Arrlex strode towards the rebel camp, his bones aching as he stepped through the large, wooden, gate protecting the outer area of the campsite, connected to a massive wall fashioned out of spiked timbers which surrounded the entire area. Rambling tiredly into the campsite he thought of as a sanctuary, Arrlex noticed all of the rebels crowding around something in the camp's center. He made his way through the large crowd to find a magician standing on a tall tower speaking to his troops.
"They have even assaulted our leader!" The mage shouted furiously. The crowd roared in anger.
"What are we gonna do about it? The Lotus troops have moved elsewhere for the time being! We can claim the city of Lighthaven for Arrlex, for magic, for revenge!"
The crowd let out a huge cheer. The man held out his hand to quiet them.
"Our numbers are in the thousands. They only have a few hundred soldiers defending the city. My clan is made up of two-thousand survivors. We can outnumber them! two thousand to two hunded is an easy victory. What do you say?!"
The magicians cried in support, screaming out their cause, or just slander against the Order of the Lotus.
"Today we march to their capital city," the man shouted again in an encouraging voice, "Prepare For war! Grab your weapons, your armor, and return here when you're geared up. We march in one hour! Prepare to reclaim your, rights, your freedom, your destiny!"
The crowd roared as it dispersed. As Arrlex made his way through giddy soldiers, He noticed strange soldiers clad in dark blue armor wearing a different crest than his. He went into the tower the man was standing on and climbed up it. As soon as he got to the top he grabbed the magician's neck in fury. "What the hell are you doing?" Arrlex snarled.
"Something YOU obviously can't." the man retorted. "I am Karthon, chief of the Clan of Light and the new commander of the rebel army."
"I am its founder and leader." Arrlex replied. Karthon struggled out of Arrlex's grip and stepped back. "Yes yes, I don't care. You see, you think you won that fight earlier but you didn't. Its a common tactic to make you feel secure. If we don't move out NOW they will strike with full force, easily overwhelming us. The Lotus guards have left for a short time, to call for aid. When they come back they won't rest in the city. Its do or die and you are stalling for too long."
"You're leading them to their deaths!"
"You are too afraid to let people die. We are leaders for a reason, to let the pawns do our work. You must learn that not everyone lives in a war. That little stunt you pulled earlier going there by yourself has made you sink down to the level of a common solder and-" Arrlex delivered a swift punch to Karthon.
"You sniveling rat, you see no value in life?!?" Arrlex roared. "They are people and I will not let them suffer because you don't care."
"Haha, we will take the city and men will die. It is too late to stop them unless you want to let them down. If you say no to this expedition you lose their support and trust. Say yes and you lose a couple hundred. Take your pick. Either way you can't stop it. Let it go organized or let it go chaotic. Whatever you do it will happen because I have riled them up. Don't worry about it. Let them finally be of service to the upper class." Karthon said as he got up.
Arrlex stormed down the tower brushing past Flamey and Freja without even noticing. He ran far into the woods and pulled out his sword. He slashed through trees with ease out of anger, his eyes bloodshot with rage. That's when he heard a cool calm voice speak in his head.
"Calm down warrior prince."
Arrlex spoke back "What do you know?"
"I am an ancient and powerful spirit that will guide you to victory. I can guarantee the success of you and your crew on this mission without a single death. All I ask is a small price."
"You can...make us invincible?" Arrlex questioned.
"Technically no, but I can make you very fortunate. I am Larkspur, god of the mind. All I need is for you to accept my spirit into your body. I need you to house it. You will have access to my powers whenever you need."
"Whats the downside." Arrlex responded.
"Ah, lets not get into that. Is it a yes or a no? I need to know now so I can report back to...so I can report back."
Arrlex sighed. "I accept your spirit."
He could feel a joyous reaction inside his head, but he also felt something else, something he couldn't put a finger on. Doubt?
He returned to camp to find that his troops had formed ranks. On top of the tower Karthon spoke.
"Now we march to the capital city! To glory! To war!" Before his eyes, the rebel army moved out to the capital of the Lotus empire.


"Yes sir, our scouts report at least 10,000 are heading this way. Its...its the entire army." Lord Essentia reported, a worried look on his face.
The hooded figure beside him looked looked amused, his silver mask glinting in the sunlight that shone onto the palace balcony. "Was Arrlex spotted?" he asked, a tinge of amusement peeking through his usually solemn tone.
"No sir. We do know that the god of mental demons got in though. The whole army will not be even lose one man. Once they take the city, Larkspur says he will drive the demon mad and force him to lead his army to their deaths when the great battle comes."
The Lotus general smiled wickedly. "Excellent. Leave one hundred men here to seem like we are putting up an effort. Stay here and fight them. Flee when it looks like they will kill you. Put up little resistance. Tell the citizens to evacuate immediately."
"Yes general Charis." Essentia said.
Charis walked out the gates of the city and rode off to lands unknown as the clouds sank bellow the horizon...

"A storm is coming.." Essentia whispered to himself, gazing at the blood red sky.
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I don't see any hints of Iltor yet. DECEPTION! THIS STORY IS A [email protected][email protected]#!
 

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I don't see any hints of Iltor yet. DECEPTION! THIS STORY IS A [email protected][email protected]#!
He's onto me! I must assasinate him before he tells anyone else!
Don't worry, you will be in teh next chapter. xP




 

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:/


Still no me...
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Gais, stop complaining. xP

This story will probably have over 30 chapters, so there's lots of time to include all of you. ;)



 

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" Arrlex stormed down the tower brushing past Flamey and Freja without even noticing."

What were they doing? xP
 

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Minja.

You NEED to add-

... "Him".
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" Arrlex stormed down the tower brushing past Flamey and Freja without even noticing."

What were they doing? xP
i was wondering that myself XP
 

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" Arrlex stormed down the tower brushing past Flamey and Freja without even noticing."

What were they doing? xP
They were inside a bush, making babies together. xP

They were listening to Karthon's speech. Lol.



 

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OH THEY ARE ALREADY DOING RU--

Oh, nvm