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My French assessment.
« on: June 14, 2013, 02:25 pm »
Bonjour je m'appelle Anil et je vais vous parler de mes vacances et j'ai 13 ans et j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre. La première fête Je suis allé à était Blackpool. Je suis allé à la plage pour se détendre. Je suis resté sur la plage en regardant le magnifique décor, j'ai exploré plus loin avec ma famille et je suis allé au magasin pour chercher quelque chose que nous pourrions acheter. Nous avons acheté un souvenir pour ma soeur. Un nous avons acheté les souvenirs, nous sommes allés à monter sur le carriagesm les chevaux traînaient. Après, nous avons voyagé autour de Blackpool en regardant les beaux bâtiments éparpillés. Les bâtiments étaient absolument sensationnel, ils étaient joli à regarder. J'ai pris des photos des bâtiments là-bas et les ai sauvés à mon nikon un appareil photo / Je leur ai alors téléchargé sur mon ordinateur grâce à l'option et leur sauvé sur mon fichier nommé "images"

Yes, my real name is Anil.

Wow, so you know my name, big deal. Wanna fight about it?


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2013, 02:43 pm »
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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2013, 02:52 pm »
I am learning French but lets say i'm not the best
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 02:55 pm »
tour de france
escargo
paris
bonjour

^My limited French vocab. Also, you live in Birmingham, Alabama?
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 02:58 pm »
tour de france
escargo
paris
bonjour

^My limited French vocab. Also, you live in Birmingham, Alabama?

Nah, I'm from England.


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #5 on: June 14, 2013, 03:00 pm »
Nah, I'm from England.

That's how good my French is. Blackpool gave it away though, I just didn't read it. xP
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #6 on: June 14, 2013, 03:01 pm »
I know more Spanish than I do French, although I might teach it to myself since I have a bit more time. French is a beautiful language.

Glowie understands French.
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #7 on: June 14, 2013, 03:03 pm »
My fluent French this translates excactly like this
Hello my name is Anil and I'll tell you about my vacation and I'm 13 years old and I live in Birmingham, England. The first party I went to was Blackpool. I went to the beach to relax. I stayed on the beach watching the beautiful scenery, I explored further with my family and I went to the store to get something we could buy. We bought a souvenir for my sister. One we bought souvenirs, we went to get on the horses dragged carriagesm. After we traveled around Blackpool watching the beautiful buildings scattered. The buildings were absolutely amazing, they were nice to look at. I took pictures of the buildings there and I saved my nikon camera / I then uploaded them on my computer with the option and saved on my file named "images"
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #8 on: June 14, 2013, 03:49 pm »
Hi, anil. My name is Shaafay...

shoot you know my name D=
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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #9 on: June 14, 2013, 03:51 pm »
I'm not bothered if people know my name. =P


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #10 on: June 14, 2013, 03:51 pm »
Cool! I remember at the beginning of the year I had to do something just like that... haha :))
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #11 on: June 14, 2013, 03:55 pm »
I'm not bothered if people know my name. =P

Is that REALLY your name? If so, then I will keep my thoughts to myself... lol.
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #12 on: June 14, 2013, 03:55 pm »
you use a lot of ands in the first sentence and it's kinda.... odd
"Bonjour je m'appelle Anil et je vais vous parler de mes vacances et j'ai 13 ans et j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre."
Hello my name is Anil and I will tell you about my vacation and I am 13 years old and I live in Birmingham, England.
 

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« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2013, 03:57 pm »
Is that REALLY your name? If so, then I will keep my thoughts to myself... lol.

Yes, it's really my name. I'm Hindu, so it's pretty fitting.


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #14 on: June 14, 2013, 03:58 pm »
you use a lot of ands in the first sentence and it's kinda.... odd
"Bonjour je m'appelle Anil et je vais vous parler de mes vacances et j'ai 13 ans et j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre."
Hello my name is Anil and I will tell you about my vacation and I am 13 years old and I live in Birmingham, England.

Well, uhm. I can't find a word to use other then and.


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #15 on: June 14, 2013, 03:58 pm »
Well, uhm. I can't find a word to use other then and.
Use semi-colons? Or start a new sentence (though they might seem short)
 

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« Reply #16 on: June 14, 2013, 04:00 pm »
Use semi-colons? Or start a new sentence (though they might seem short)

That might help, thanks for the advice.


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #17 on: June 14, 2013, 04:01 pm »
Well, uhm. I can't find a word to use other then and.
Well less and and more comma would be better
"Bonjour je m'appelle Anil, je vais vous parler de mes vacances, j'ai 13 ans, j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre."
though the order still sounds weird. what about atleast making it something such as
"Bonjour! Je m'appelle Anil, et  j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre. J'ai 13 ans. Je vais vous parler de mes vacances."?
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #18 on: June 14, 2013, 04:03 pm »
That might help, thanks for the advice.
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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #19 on: June 14, 2013, 04:03 pm »
Well less and and more comma would be better
"Bonjour je m'appelle Anil, je vais vous parler de mes vacances, j'ai 13 ans, j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre."
though the order still sounds weird. what about atleast making it something such as
"Bonjour! Je m'appelle Anil, et  j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre. J'ai 13 ans. Je vais vous parler de mes vacances."?

Alright, thank you for the help. I appreciate it. =)


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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #20 on: June 14, 2013, 04:05 pm »
Alright, thank you for the help. I appreciate it. =)
No problem c:
 

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Re: My French assessment.
« Reply #21 on: June 14, 2013, 04:07 pm »
Bonjour je m'appelle Anil et je vais vous parler de mes vacances et j'ai 13 ans et j'habite à Birmingham, en Angleterre. La première fête Je suis allé à était Blackpool. Je suis allé à la plage pour se détendre. Je suis resté sur la plage en regardant le magnifique décor, j'ai exploré plus loin avec ma famille et je suis allé au magasin pour chercher quelque chose que nous pourrions acheter. Nous avons acheté un souvenir pour ma soeur. Un nous avons acheté les souvenirs, nous sommes allés à monter sur le carriagesm les chevaux traînaient. Après, nous avons voyagé autour de Blackpool en regardant les beaux bâtiments éparpillés. Les bâtiments étaient absolument sensationnel, ils étaient joli à regarder. J'ai pris des photos des bâtiments là-bas et les ai sauvés à mon nikon un appareil photo / Je leur ai alors téléchargé sur mon ordinateur grâce à l'option et leur sauvé sur mon fichier nommé "images"

Yes, my real name is Anil.

Wow, so you know my name, big deal. Wanna fight about it?
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