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[Denied]"This" Was Awesome!
« on: June 13, 2013, 06:59 am »
Hey, Pai here! Now I'm going to review of the game "This" by GnashtyNas.

Game Info:

Game Name: This

Game Creator: GnashtyNas

Type of Game: Retro Arcade

Introduction:

"This" or the game is a retro arcade game. "This" is GnashtyNas' first retro arcade game, I did not know how it got good! The game name got from the world name of the game.

Storyline:

You found yourself dedicated to a new planet and find out what is here. And after some few levels, you have to save a girl named Geena. There are some quests by some people, the first set of quests is from a turtle that looks like a bear. I will not talk about this more. Why? I might spoil it.

Game Play:

When I started playing it, I said in my mind: "Wow, an original game!" I like the originality very much. There are quests from a turtle that looks like a bear and from one unknown person, when you finish them, you'll get some prizes you might need! You might find some clues to find Geena, so be sure to explore the whole game! There are also some secrets on the game, so keep your eyes open for switches and switch on your speaker to hear the sound of some activated invisible switches. There are no puzzles perhaps, it's a retro arcade game. There is a secret path in the second to the last or last stage, you just go beneath that water part and just walk through the tunnel until the end of the stage.

Placements:

The placement of the first enemie should be fixed because, the blocks at the side of the enemy let's the enemie keep on walking. The scenery was very good and very creative.  The enemy placement can be done better next time. The item placement is the same as the enemy placement. The scenery looks very good.

Originality:

It's original. (For me.) Mini-quests, the story separated into some parts, etc.

Negatives:
-Sometimes hazards are close to each other.
-Many updates to the game.

Positives:
-Many secrets.
-Has a good storyline.
-Has many type of quests.

Ratings:

Challenge: 4/5
It was challenging but, it seems to be a little easy to me but, it may be hard for you.

Item Placement: 4/5
It was very good except for one part.

Enemy Placement: 4/5
Same as the Item Placement.

Creativity: 5/5
Very good, very creative.

Scenery: 5/5
It's like the real world, just look at it!

Originality: 5/5
Original, I'm sorry if I'm wrong.

Fun: 5/5

Total Score: 32 /35

Final Message:

It was a great game, but not the best, GnashtyNas could make more great games like This and goodbye for now!
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2013, 07:38 am »
Hmmm, a tad short, felt like it could have some more detail.

Good luck! ;)
 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #2 on: June 13, 2013, 07:40 am »
Hmmm, a tad short, felt like it could have some more detail.

Good luck! ;)
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #3 on: June 13, 2013, 09:33 am »
Good luck. Just might wanna fix a few wording errors on the introduction.

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #4 on: June 13, 2013, 12:30 pm »
Dude don't copy what 7grant2 write. It makes the recruiters think that you had to copy.
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #5 on: June 13, 2013, 03:57 pm »
Dude don't copy what 7grant2 write. It makes the recruiters think that you had to copy.
She didn't copy anything...
 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #6 on: June 13, 2013, 05:45 pm »
Try making it a little longer  8)


 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #7 on: June 13, 2013, 06:25 pm »
She didn't copy anything...
Using the word "This" in it was copying.
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #8 on: June 14, 2013, 04:47 am »
Using the word "This" in it was copying.
I first wrote this in a piece of paper before 7grant2 reviewed it.
 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #9 on: June 15, 2013, 02:37 am »
Try making it a little longer  8)
I already did that. My first review application was shorter.
 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #10 on: June 15, 2013, 03:07 am »
Good luck Pai my buddy.
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #11 on: June 15, 2013, 03:08 am »
Good luck Pai my buddy.
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #12 on: June 15, 2013, 07:31 am »
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #13 on: June 15, 2013, 07:47 am »
Goodluck ;)
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #15 on: June 15, 2013, 09:26 am »
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #19 on: June 16, 2013, 02:55 am »
I would try to spread your paragraphs out a little more. The headline said "Gameplay" but you talked both about scenery and placement etc. Try to make seperate paragraphs for each. Also, as all the other said, it could have been longer, you could have talked a bit more about game. I wish you luck  ;)
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #20 on: June 16, 2013, 03:28 am »
I would try to spread your paragraphs out a little more. The headline said "Gameplay" but you talked both about scenery and placement etc. Try to make seperate paragraphs for each. Also, as all the other said, it could have been longer, you could have talked a bit more about game. I wish you luck  ;)
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #21 on: June 16, 2013, 06:54 am »
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« Reply #23 on: June 16, 2013, 07:38 am »
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #24 on: June 16, 2013, 08:06 am »
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #25 on: June 16, 2013, 09:04 am »
Updated.
 

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« Reply #26 on: June 16, 2013, 06:53 pm »
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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #27 on: June 17, 2013, 07:02 am »
I'm going to update this once more.
 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #28 on: June 17, 2013, 07:43 am »

Good luck! :D I'll give you a free thank to help you on the way. :3

You also could have listen to some suggestions and tips from Spidapig and Superluigi.
*Spidapig has some pretty good tips.

 

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Re: [Application]"This" Was Awesome!
« Reply #29 on: June 17, 2013, 07:46 am »
Thanks, I'll check it out.