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[Denied] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« on: June 08, 2013, 10:22 am »
Hey there guys! I'm in a really good mode today! The sun is shining, my cats aren't bugging me at the mo-... Great. I jinxed it. Well at least I get to review this. Wait. What do you mean what's this? Its the game!!! You know that featured game called this! No I am not trolling you , rustling your jimmies
or anything. Its called this. And its made by gnashtynas. Deal with it. Well we might as well start the review. (And give me a moment to get my cats off the table.)

Well let's start with the gameplay of this. Its the typical gameplay of any *rag. (*Retro arcade game) You go from the left of the screen to the right. Although this game does do something different. In some level's there will be little chambers with challenges in them. Once the challenge is completed the player can acquire the power up that the chamber contained. One problem with this. These are completely optional, meaning that you can skip though a bunch of stages. But I could understand why he would want to (put's on sunglasses) make a game like this.

This isn't really based on difficulty. Its kind of like Kirby's epic yarn. The game is SUPER easy. The hard part of the game is collecting as much as you can! In this the game is based on collecting as much treasure as you can. So if you don't like games that are as I call them Collectathons don't play this game. But in some stages does this game have some serious difficulty. Like the stage with the rising cacti. Man. That was tough.

The story of the game is super odd. It starts with you saying that you landed on a planet. Then it starts... Well. It starts getting off track. You suddenly start talking about a person named Geena. (Who ios never seen in the game ever.) The story is nearly non existent.

For this, there isn't much else to talk about. So here are my thoughts on the game:
pros
Good game for newcomers
It's original.
cons
There are no puzzles
its super easy
the story makes no sense.

Feature worthy? No. No its not. The game lacks many things. Calling it feature worthy would be silly. But the game still is fun, and has a very original feel to it.

Thanks for reading this! Peace!
« Last Edit: June 08, 2013, 06:40 pm by bluecat2012 »
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Re: [Application] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2013, 11:35 am »
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It's missing details.  Also, if you're going to make a Pros/Cons section, still make complete sentences under them.  It always looks better.
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Re: [Application] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« Reply #2 on: June 08, 2013, 06:39 pm »
Denied.

It's missing details.  Also, if you're going to make a Pros/Cons section, still make complete sentences under them.  It always looks better.
Thanks for the opinion! Also how many week's till I can reapply?
« Last Edit: June 08, 2013, 06:42 pm by bluecat2012 »
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Re: [Application] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« Reply #3 on: June 09, 2013, 02:02 am »
Thanks for the opinion! Also how many week's till I can reapply?
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Re: [Denied] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« Reply #4 on: June 09, 2013, 04:32 am »
Unlucky on being denied. It can take time.

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Re: [Denied] Game's such as this just need improvement.
« Reply #5 on: June 11, 2013, 05:34 pm »
Unlucky on being denied. It can take time.
I know. :P This was my fourth attempt. I will admit this sucked. It was way WAY to short. But I guess I shoulda picked a bigger game so I could talk about it more. (also I think I needed more jokes.)
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