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"An assortment of haiku"
« on: June 05, 2013, 11:15 am »
Due to school, I had a project where I had to write multiple poems under the haiku styling. That being said I didn't exactly take this entire project seriously with my writing.

Below are a bunch of random poems I figured some of you would at least kind of care to read. Poem subjects range from suicide, to bad relationships, to pizza, and other random things. Not all are serious, not all are written jokingly. Enjoy, Mack's haiku collection.

Wind blows left to right
Catching dust in the warm air
Towards the unknown

The needles ink filled
Pressing into fresh clean skin
The one true canvas

The girl of my dreams
Not really what she portrayed
But just a nightmare

My closest old friend
Please don’t ever leave my life
Don’t stop existing

The people unite
Work for a new better day
We control the world

My hands gripping hers
“You mean the world to me, dear”
I’m happy again

From the start to end
Chords ring from the instrument
Beauty is in sound

Let go of your chains
Fly free, to the world’s edges
Collide with the sky

Don’t worry about
Any of the world’s problems
Just go with the flow

Your warm aura brings
Joy to so many people
I love you, pizza

I throw the small orb
Towards the dangerous beast
Gotta catch them all

Bugs terrify me
Crawling, buzzing on my skin
Seriously, stop

The lyrics I love
Always live by the music
It’s my way of life

Please don’t lose more weight
I think you look so perfect
Don’t lose one more pound

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #1 on: June 05, 2013, 11:48 am »
And now just for you guys, a haiku about this forum.

A bump on my post
To the top of general
Please notice my thread

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #2 on: June 05, 2013, 11:55 am »
I've done these before
They are very cool and good
So people write them

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #3 on: June 05, 2013, 12:05 pm »
Haikus are quite dull
I can just use random words
Unappetizing
For fifty and nine he swam along just fine, a mind that’s trained to see, always would know what goes on inside, goes on in me.
 

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #4 on: June 05, 2013, 12:08 pm »
Haikus are quite dull
I can just use random words
Unappetizing

That is true
This is more of rap
I don't know
 

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #5 on: June 05, 2013, 12:10 pm »
I'm quite the poet
People admire my skills
Or so I have heard
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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #6 on: June 05, 2013, 12:13 pm »
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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #7 on: June 05, 2013, 12:15 pm »
Sploder likes me now
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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #8 on: June 05, 2013, 12:17 pm »
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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #9 on: June 05, 2013, 12:20 pm »
You guys aren't doing it right. It's 3 syllable, 5 syllable, 3 syllable.
 

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Re: "An assortment of haiku"
« Reply #10 on: June 05, 2013, 12:22 pm »
You guys aren't doing it right. It's 3 syllable, 5 syllable, 3 syllable.
No it's not, it's 5 7 5. Haiku has 17 syllables.