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I'm making a manga. What do you guys think?...
« on: May 27, 2013, 11:14 am »
So for the past couple weeks I have been writing a very thought out story that came to me in a dream one night.
It is about a girl ninja (still working out the name) who was evacuated as a young girl (her town was being bombed) and came to a small town in japan, she was tort kung-fu by her dad at a young age so joined the dojo there, after a few years the town was invaded by dark spirits who who took over the town, she was approached by the evil overlord who shot some negative energy at her but she had learned an old art where one can capture the energy.  Then her Sensei was taken over by the dark spirits and so she had to flee from the town.

 She then trained in a Forrest making the dark red flame turn to a green flame witch represents piece, she then carried on to another town far from hers and helped out there cooking, teaching and looking after the people, then one night one of her energy flames turned blue meaning equality so she continued her journey on-wards...

The story is still being tweaked slightly beyond this point but I do have it written out until there and this will be made into a manga hopefully  :D

Here are some of the character designs witch I have been working on for a couple of days, drawing sketches and changing the outfits slightly.


Please tell me what you think of it so far. Would it be a good idea? Even if not im still going to do it so that I have some experience if I ever publish a real manga book.


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Re: I'm making a manga. What do you guys think?...
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 11:33 am »
I'd say continue it. I love Manga, and the story seems really good if you can expand a bit on it. Your artwork is nice to look at as well.  ;)
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« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2013, 11:35 am »
I'd say continue it. I love Manga, and the story seems really good if you can expand a bit on it. Your artwork is nice to look at as well.  ;)
Thanks man, And I have expanded the story ALOT there is an ending and I have thought about a series to it already I just don't want to tell you guys everything just yet unless it changes and I get some hate for changing that part.


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« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 11:36 am »
Thanks man, And I have expanded the story ALOT there is an ending and I have thought about a series to it already I just don't want to tell you guys everything just yet unless it changes and I get some hate for changing that part.
That sounds really interesting. I wish you good luck on it. Your quite talented.
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« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 11:37 am »
That sounds really interesting. I wish you good luck on it. Your quite talented.
Thanks, a bird wish me good luck on it too as it plopped on my knee yesterday at the beach xD


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« Reply #5 on: May 27, 2013, 11:52 am »
oh,

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« Reply #6 on: May 27, 2013, 11:59 am »


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« Reply #7 on: May 27, 2013, 12:00 pm »
looks cool!

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« Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 12:05 pm »


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Re: I'm making a manga. What do you guys think?...
« Reply #9 on: May 28, 2013, 06:09 am »
Finally finished coloring this image and inking it with a pen, it looks amazing from afar but you cant really see the colors in this image.

Tell me what you think!


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« Reply #10 on: May 28, 2013, 08:04 am »

I wrecked this image by inking it but oh well. A new character design!


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« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2013, 06:35 pm »
Finally finished coloring this image and inking it with a pen, it looks amazing from afar but you cant really see the colors in this image.

Tell me what you think!
I think her wrist and shoulder is broken!
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« Reply #12 on: May 29, 2013, 10:43 am »
I think her wrist and shoulder is broken!
Sorry I rushed this one a little because I was just leaving a restaurant when I had finished.


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« Reply #13 on: May 29, 2013, 10:44 am »
It's amazing
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« Reply #15 on: May 29, 2013, 10:49 am »
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Re: I'm making a manga. What do you guys think?...
« Reply #16 on: May 29, 2013, 10:51 am »
I REALLY like the art!
I'm working on it right now.


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