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THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
« on: May 26, 2013, 11:45 pm »
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3127929/1/THE-TRIGGER


Tell me what you think and what advice you may have for me. :-]


It isn't complete in the slightest as I have only finished two chapters.  If you enjoyed it, you could share it with your friends or whatever.


 

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Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2013, 12:51 am »
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Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2013, 12:55 am »
cool and good detailed writing

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Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
« Reply #3 on: May 27, 2013, 04:33 am »
bump dat shiz


 

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« Reply #4 on: May 27, 2013, 02:45 pm »
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Re: THE TRIGGER - A freaking awesome story I'm writing
« Reply #5 on: May 28, 2013, 12:23 am »
No one's interested? :(