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My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« on: April 27, 2013, 04:07 pm »
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/616398

If you cannot see it, I am sorry. hmm...
It isn't the greatest, but you know what, for being my first animation, I am content.
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #1 on: April 27, 2013, 04:37 pm »
Nice. Cool character.


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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #2 on: April 27, 2013, 04:43 pm »
Nice. Cool character.


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THE GROUND IS MOVING BY HIS RIGHT LEG
Lol, yep. Just a small error I didn't want to fix.
Thanks for some actual feedback though. =D
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #3 on: April 27, 2013, 04:51 pm »
I figured you'd notice, I'm screwin' with ya xD
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #4 on: April 27, 2013, 05:19 pm »
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #5 on: April 27, 2013, 05:25 pm »
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #6 on: April 27, 2013, 10:09 pm »
I think it goes too fast. like there should be a second were he looks at the rock, then picks it up. also should be longer delay after he throws it in before it comes flying back out at him. timing is crucial in these animations. if everything goes too fast no one can see whats going on.
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #7 on: April 27, 2013, 10:10 pm »
I think it goes too fast. like there should be a second were he looks at the rock, then picks it up. also should be 1-2 seconds delay after he throws it in before it comes flying back out at him. timing is crucial in these animations. if everything goes too fast no one can see whats going on.
The program I used is very touchy, I intended that, but it kept speeding up when I tested it, so I have no idea how to fix it.
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #8 on: April 27, 2013, 10:13 pm »
It was a bit short, but amazing drawing. =)
 

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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #9 on: April 27, 2013, 10:19 pm »
It was a bit short, but amazing drawing. =)
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #10 on: April 27, 2013, 10:26 pm »
Short, but cool! Can't wait to see more if you plan on doing more.
 

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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #11 on: April 27, 2013, 10:28 pm »
Short, but cool! Can't wait to see more if you plan on doing more.
Thanks, I plan on it, but I am going to look at other programs, might save me a lot of effort.
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #12 on: April 27, 2013, 10:51 pm »
:( Darn, I can't see it. Could you make a youtube vid and post it?

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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #13 on: April 27, 2013, 11:11 pm »
:( Darn, I can't see it. Could you make a youtube vid and post it?
Really? grrr... it was weird when uploading... did you try refreshing?
I might upload to youtube, not sure yet.
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #14 on: April 28, 2013, 02:01 am »
It's short,
but it's awesome ^_^
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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #15 on: April 28, 2013, 05:45 am »
:( Darn, I can't see it. Could you make a youtube vid and post it?
Try to refresh the page. Happened to me too.
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« Reply #16 on: April 28, 2013, 07:33 am »
Really? grrr... it was weird when uploading... did you try refreshing?
I might upload to youtube, not sure yet.
I tried refreshing. All it does is give me a clear screen of that with a picture symbol in the top left corner.

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Re: My first ever animation(links to newgrounds)
« Reply #17 on: April 28, 2013, 07:34 am »
Oh! I can see it! It's pretty cool... but the arm when he's throwing the rock needs more of a swing.

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