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[APPLICATION] Shocking effects of the Electriod
« on: April 04, 2013, 09:27 pm »
Name of Game: Electriod
Created by: sladnerm
Genre: Shooting
Reviewed by: Socializ3
Game: http://www.sploder.com/games/members/sladnerm/play/electroid-4/

My reviewing scale has a total of 100 points into 6 parts. Include the following categories:

<> Scenery and background.[25 points]
<> Difficulty [10 points]
<> Creativity [30 points]
<> Story [15 points]
<> Comments [10 points]
<> Your guess is good as mine  ;) [10 points]

Scenery and background:

The Scenery is decent. Many obstacles and challenges perfect for challengers, but not more those who dislike puzzles. Next next awesome game make sure you have a decent amount of puzzles. Over doing obstacles is a big turn off. Again this game makes me want to do my very best to over come those obstacles.  :). [-2pts.] The background is about the same, and i cannot say much. The only problem you should fix is the beginning. The Transport keeps going back and fourth. I know you put that in your change for your own purposes. That feature can make people leave your game unrated with 1 star or no votes at all. [-2pts.]
Overall 21/25 points = 84%   :D

Difficultly:8

Electriod is really difficult. Really even though you made this game really challenging and took the time to make this game. I have to give you credit. I'm really proud of you working your very best. You made it hard that i keep dying getting that golden key, but wanting me to succeed. Amazing! [-0pts.]
Overall: 10/10 = 100% A+  ;D

Creativity/story

Great Creativity! Like i advice my friends, creativity is the key! I kinda get your story how the locked blocks of yellow,red, and blue. (Colors of common electricity.) Using the 9 crystals to power up the Electriod is pretty neat. I Don't even have to think and pause. I can just play it. [-0pts.]
Overall: 45/45 points = 100% A+  ;D

Side notes: Sorry your creativity got me over excited i reviewed your whole story too!  :o

Comments

You only got 1 comment so far that people think is really cool. Even you only got 1 comment, your really bright to get over 100 comments in your future games. :) [-3pts.]
Overall: 7/10 points = 70% C-   :)

Your Guess is good as mind  ;)

Your guess is pretty much your great mind! I believe everyone deserves a little push. Thank you  Sladnerm for letting me review your game! I'll give you 10 points for letting me do a great reviewer. Also not letting me write a whole paragraph, but having an open mind.
Overall: 10/10 points = A+  :D

My personal Opinions

Even though  I am not yet to pass this game. You did make someone do an amazing Review about Electriod. your game does have pros and cons like any other game. Take advice, be creative, and be
open-minded about your games! Splendid game!

Overall Review:

89 out of 100
achievement that is significantly above the level necessary to meet a player's requirements.  ;D




« Last Edit: April 04, 2013, 09:44 pm by Socializ3 »

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Re: [APPLICATION] Electriod
« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2013, 09:36 pm »
Err.... Check your spelling, Thanks so much though you are AWESOME!
 

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Re: [APPLICATION] Electriod
« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2013, 09:40 pm »
Err.... Check your spelling, Thanks so much though you are AWESOME!

Okay I'll reread it, no problem! Thanks for letting me do my 1st application.  :)

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Re: [APPLICATION] Shocking effects of the Electriod
« Reply #3 on: June 11, 2013, 09:20 pm »
BUMP :)

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Re: [APPLICATION] Shocking effects of the Electriod
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2013, 11:49 am »
Denied.
Spelling, wording, and repetiveness are all things to look at when writing a review.
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Re: [APPLICATION] Shocking effects of the Electriod
« Reply #5 on: June 17, 2013, 02:23 pm »
Denied.
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Re: [APPLICATION] Shocking effects of the Electriod
« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2013, 05:22 pm »
better luck next time





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