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USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« on: February 25, 2013, 09:06 pm »
USERNAME- A very long creepypasta by cashin95

I am a devoted member on sploder. I have spent 4 years here on various accounts.
I have many friends, and meet many members with very unusual usernames.
your supposed to make a name with 3-12 characters, but you are able to make a 1+2 letter username.
But its true your only supposed to have only letters and # in your name.
spaces don't count either, they count as other symbols.

Apart from that.
one day, I am logged onto sploder as usual, when I see a blank post down at the bottom of my screen. I am stunned to see that the messenger who left the message had no username in the name spot, and that his avatar had features that aren't accessable in the avatar editor.

it seemed that it had a hood on. A black one. But it wasn't 8-bit, no. This was an actual image.
I decide to investigate some more, so I click on the messenger's avatar so I can get to his profile page.
When the browser decides to load, I am horrified to see that everything on this user was messed up
with all his information. When it said joined, it shows a red bar, and when it said last visited, there was a black bar. And down below, there were Egyptian symbols where the actions, reactions and such would be.
but the info is easy to see. Where it shows how many comments the user has posted, it says 0.
I think this is stupid, since he posted on my page, so I click "view".

This is when I freak out. In place of where the comments would be, there was an 8-bit skull with the bloody text below that says " Don't count your sins." he obviously doesn't want us to see his messages.
After a bit more research I decide its all a glitch. That night I wake up in the middle of the night to discover that somebody was trying to chat with me on skype. Its really dark out, so I pull out  my phone and answer whoever it is on my phone. When it shows who calling, I am stupified to see that the caller has no name, and that his user image is the same exact one from sploder.

I quickly decline the chat, not wanting to pull myself into the arms of a pedo.
the next morning I log onto my laptop. When I go to type in sploder, A message pops up and indicates that
No-namer (what I'll refer to the unnamed user as) wants to video chat.
I decline once more, but to my horror, it shows last night he tried to call me so many times, I can't even explain the number. Its just a gigantic heap of 9s put together.

Once more he tries to call me, except that I see his avatar now has blood all over his hood.
I decide to get this over with, so I accept the call.
(This next part is very gory, I'm sorry)
As soon as I accept the call, I see the same hooded figure in my screen.
I can't see his face, as there is a shadow over it.
Then with he backs away from the screen, I see a heap of sharp gadgets and murder tools and such hanging all over the wall. When I try to push end call, the message "Don't go there" pops up, and the call goes into full screen. As he backs away, I see a hospital bed without the life preservers around on the floor.
then, when I look more closely, I see a struggling body roped down to the bed with a bag over whoever's head it is.

The hooded figure moves over to the bed and pulls the bag off of his victims face.
I see it is my mother on that hospital bed. My mother.
I dash for the phone, but when I get to my desk, it isn't there.
so, I sprint to my door, but to my horror, its locked.
I have no choice but to sit and watch.

My mother has a giant piece of duct tape over her mouth, but I can see her horrified face looking at me.
her eyes twisted in fear and sorrow.
Then I hear the hooded figure, who is pacing around the room, say something I couldn't pronounce.
all I heard were rasps and hisses.
He looks around his torture chamber, and picks up a bat.
he holds it in the air, and whacks my mom with it.
I'm crying now.
then he picks out a butcher knife, and cuts off my mothers hands
I'm bawling now.
My mother is crying blood.
then she starts spitting up blood, which makes the stickiness on the duct tape fall off, and with her chance, she screams to me "I love you my son!!
I reply through tears, I love you too mom.
Then while I hear my mother bawling, the hooded figure pulls out a gun and shoots her in the chest, making guts and gore and blood splatter instantly on the screen.
I can't believe it, my mother is dead.
the all of a sudden, the chat ends.
But no-namer isn't done.
he leaves a message saying.
"open your door"
I am freaked, since I know I might die, but I think I'll be able to find a police station in time.
I slowly open my door, Thankful its open. When I look up I see the black figure stand there.
He starts backing toward me, I'm scrambling for something to bash his head with.
but he knocks me to the ground.
then he pulls out a chainsaw.
He starts it up and says in a raspy voice "lets go visit your mommy!"

That's all I remember of my life.
being dead isn't so bad.
I have my mother.
I had a nice life.

THE END

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2013, 09:13 pm »
omfg dude

Idea - 9/10 I've always wanted to hear a good sploder creepypasta and the hooded figure is cool

Presentation  -5/10 Could've been explained better..grammar mistakes here and there. all that.

Ending - 2/10 Sorry bro but the ending seemed way to predictable and forced


OVERALL SCORE- 5.3/10

Could be better but not bad at all
 

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #2 on: February 25, 2013, 09:15 pm »
omfg dude

Idea - 9/10 I've always wanted to hear a good sploder creepypasta and the hooded figure is cool

Presentation  -5/10 Could've been explained better..grammar mistakes here and there. all that.

Ending - 2/10 Sorry bro but the ending seemed way to predictable and forced


OVERALL SCORE- 5.3/10

Could be better but not bad at all
this is my first, so I guess this is pretty awesome for a start. Thanks charis

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #3 on: February 25, 2013, 09:32 pm »
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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #4 on: February 26, 2013, 12:38 am »
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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #5 on: February 26, 2013, 12:59 am »
Damn scary lol.
 

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #7 on: February 26, 2013, 06:59 am »
Awesome. You inspired me to write a sploder creepypasta :)
 

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #8 on: February 26, 2013, 07:08 am »
Awesome. You inspired me to write a sploder creepypasta :)
I'll read once you've accomplished writing it.

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #9 on: February 26, 2013, 07:10 am »
I'll read once you've accomplished writing it.


Okay, cool. I'll base it on a fictional long lost sploder member.
 

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #10 on: February 26, 2013, 07:13 am »


Okay, cool. I'll base it on a fictional long lost sploder member.
send me the finished link in a PM

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Re: USERNAME:A SPLODER CREEPYPASTA BY- CASHIN95 [original]
« Reply #11 on: February 26, 2013, 03:11 pm »
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