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For my application.I'm going to review PLANET SLINGSHOT by spazskater45. I'm not going to repeat that over and over again,so i'll call him spazzy.

GAMEPLAY
Awesome,the gameplay had a source,a concept,and an objective.You have to fling you little raccoon planet to planet (by this point i've discovered his name is cinder.oops).I quite like it as it is unique,This is the first game i've seen that you fling raccoons to other planets.The making must have taken effort.However,my ratings are strict,as no one's completed it,i'm giving this a point off,giving game play 8.6.

SCENARY
The scenary is great!The planets looked like gumdrops,making it all the sweeter!There is an annoying part of it,THE BIG RED LINES.They toattaly annoy the heck out of you because the are ONE HIT KILLERZ D: .But scenary was awesome whatsoever,8.4.

PLACEMENT
The placement was OK,the planets could have been nearer together,that would have gave gameplay 9.6,the lines were placed perfectly,however.Perfectly placed in places that annoy you.They were the KILLERZ i was talking about in the scenary.This category is good,9.5.

PUZZLES
If you call flinging a raccoon from one planet to another,this game was a puzzle!However,I will not include puzzles in my rating because this game didn't need any.

TIME TO SUM IT UP.Time to sum it up!Here are the ratings.P.S I will include more categorys for my next review(If I get accepted).

Awesomeness:7.9
Difficulty:10!
Puzzle:Not included.
Scenary:8.4
Gameplay:8.6
Placement:9.5

Overall:7.8

This is an awesome game,it deserves a whole lot!If it is feutured,It deserves it.

THIS HAS BEEN A MRHAMMER REVIEW,NOW GO MAKE ME A SANDWICH!>:O
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #1 on: January 22, 2013, 01:14 pm »
All I can say[Type] is good luck. ;)
 

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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #2 on: January 22, 2013, 02:45 pm »
Denied
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #3 on: January 22, 2013, 03:05 pm »
Denied
Why am I denied?I tried and put effort,plus,I'm 8.
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #4 on: January 22, 2013, 04:01 pm »
Why am I denied?I tried and put effort,plus,I'm 8.
I dunno why u got denied probs more gamplay
 

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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #5 on: January 22, 2013, 04:26 pm »
More gamplay.
That was he biggest bit.
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #6 on: January 22, 2013, 07:10 pm »
you didn't need to talk too much about puzzles, yet you had a whole section on it. that is one thing...
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #7 on: January 23, 2013, 03:42 pm »
you didn't need to talk too much about puzzles, yet you had a whole section on it. that is one thing...
That's all?I'm a doofus. :o
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 04:47 pm »
That's all?I'm a doofus. :o
That's not all, but it is nice for each reviewer to come up with their own style, and interpreting advice can help that.
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 05:13 pm »
Just add more stuff about the game next time. Zoom in on certain levels; analyse it closely
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #10 on: January 24, 2013, 03:57 pm »
There's just one problem,i'm stuck on level 2  ???
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #11 on: January 24, 2013, 03:59 pm »
There's just one problem,i'm stuck on level 2  ???
Well then, here is my final tip in this thread, don't write reviews on games you cannot get very far in, there is no way you can pass, especially if the recruiters have gotten far in the game and can proove you wrong.
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #12 on: January 24, 2013, 04:01 pm »
Well then, here is my final tip in this thread, don't write reviews on games you cannot get very far in, there is no way you can pass, especially if the recruiters have gotten far in the game and can proove you wrong.
Ok,I'll do a game that i've completed before in.....
how long till I can re-apply?
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Re: (Application) Aw,i'm not a spacebar ninja D:(Planet slingshot)
« Reply #13 on: January 24, 2013, 04:05 pm »
Ok,I'll do a game that i've completed before in.....
how long till I can re-apply?
Wait until the Reviewer application V.2 is ready, that should be in a day, everyone is getting a clean slate from break so when that comes available you can try again, but mind you, there will be a 3 week wait to re-apply if denied now.
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