Author Topic: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown  (Read 216 times)

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This is my application review on The most epic rollercoaster ever by antoniobrown

In this game, he has 2 connected dots. They roll down the hill made by drawn platforms made white. Then goes around a bend and comes back up and gets carried up by a large black platform moving up and down. The black platform carries you up and you ride away.

         I think the platform placement is amazing! I makes it a wonderful hill that the dots can ride down. I"ll bet he worked very hard on the very small white platforms that hold the rollercoaster up. There's about forty-five of them!

      I think the bend is very creative. After the dots come down the amazing hill, they go around a bend and a platform gets removed from the game.  Then it comes around to the best part of the game...

        The black platform that brings up the 2 connected dots. While your going, the black platform is coming down. Once it comes down, the dots go onto the platform and it brings them up. Once it gets to the top, It lets the dots go and they go of into the open platform and you get the only coin you can get in the game.

    All in all, I think this is a wonderful game and I'd give it 5/5 stars!
 

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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 12:03 pm »
Too short, you really shouldn't put walkthrough, recruiters don't like that and you will probably get denied. Good try though  8) :o
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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2012, 12:45 pm »
ok, thanks
 

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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2012, 12:45 pm »
wait, are you a recuriter
 

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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2012, 12:46 pm »
Nah, I'm Jr. member, but giving advice.
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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2012, 12:53 pm »
ah ok i'll see what a recuriter has too say
 

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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #6 on: December 09, 2012, 01:35 am »
Denied. Go into more detail without making it a walkthrough and provide constructive criticism on what the creator could do better next time. You can reapply in 2 weeks.
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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2012, 05:07 am »
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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2012, 08:14 am »
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Re: [Applcation] "The most epic rollercoaster ever" by antoniobrown
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2012, 12:03 pm »
Thanks, mat7772!