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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #30 on: December 02, 2012, 10:29 pm »
That was for intended purposes my dear, in order to demonstrate what a subtle grammatical error looks like.
This quote is a run on sentence. You used the comma splice incorrectly.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #31 on: December 02, 2012, 10:34 pm »
This quote is a run on sentence. You used the comma splice incorrectly.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #32 on: December 02, 2012, 10:34 pm »
This quote is a run on sentence. You used the comma splice incorrectly.
I think that run on should be:
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #33 on: December 02, 2012, 10:35 pm »
Please ignore the lack of punctuation in my last sentence.



 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #34 on: December 02, 2012, 10:37 pm »
Please ignore the lack of punctuation in my last sentence.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #35 on: December 02, 2012, 10:45 pm »
So much grammar errors.... *explodes*  ;D

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #36 on: December 02, 2012, 11:47 pm »
 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #37 on: December 03, 2012, 11:17 am »
i went to the shop and bought a bannana

Correction: I went to the shop and bought a bannana.

tom likes football even though he is a dog he lost the last game

Correction: Tom likes Football, even though he is a dog, he lost the last game.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #38 on: December 03, 2012, 01:23 pm »
i went to the shop and bought a bannana

Correction: I went to the shop and bought a banana.

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #39 on: December 03, 2012, 02:12 pm »
lmao at this thread

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #40 on: December 03, 2012, 03:17 pm »
I have no grammar mistakes in this post.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #41 on: December 03, 2012, 03:53 pm »
 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #42 on: December 03, 2012, 05:00 pm »
ya anyway its rule 2 eto 7
 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #43 on: December 03, 2012, 05:01 pm »
play mistical magic 1-56 something
 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #44 on: December 03, 2012, 05:01 pm »
play splitscreen
 

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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #45 on: December 03, 2012, 05:03 pm »
Play mystical magic 1-56 something.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #46 on: December 03, 2012, 10:15 pm »
ya anyway its rule 2 eto 7
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #47 on: December 04, 2012, 09:08 am »
i went to the shop and bought a bannana

Correction: I went to the shop and bought a bannana.

tom likes football even though he is a dog he lost the last game

Correction: Tom likes Football, even though he is a dog, he lost the last game.
The second sentence is wrong. It is a run-on.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #48 on: December 05, 2012, 12:24 am »
The second sentence is wrong. It is a run-on.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #49 on: December 05, 2012, 01:10 am »
eye dair u 2 curect dis.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #50 on: December 05, 2012, 01:20 am »
eye dair u 2 curect dis.
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #51 on: December 05, 2012, 01:24 am »
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Re: The Correction Thread
« Reply #52 on: December 05, 2012, 01:27 am »
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