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Annoucer: Today we have won the first war in many to take over the universe! We have captured Amerjaden! Most of the Greylis and Srylis have been killed, 2 ships escaped. One ship holds Greylis and the other Srylis. No Amer survived!
Crowd: YAY!
Annoucer: Both ships are important as they may house the key to rebirthing Earth! As you well know, most populants of Earth were killed by flooding caused by polution, the survivors brought as many species to Mars, and worked on rebirthing Earth. The Expansion Program was started by the ISS and attempted to take over all of the most advanced species starting with the smartest, the Amer, after the ISS learned of a life crystal that could bring Earth back to life, The ISS got the Military to help them destroy Amerjaden, we have not yet discovered this crystal.



Okay so the story was already explained by the prolouge. What you need to know is that the Earthlings will attempt to invade Hoturki next. You will help stop them. You can be:
1. A Hoturki, they are extremely powerful but not too smart; very fast.(ape-like)
2. A Lythuir, they hold average intelligence and are cappable of flight and firing projectiles; very fast and weak.(Dragon-like; on Martian side)
3. A Srylis, very powerful but not too smart; very fast.(Crab-like)
4. A Greylis, very fast and weak, very smart.(wolf-like)
5. A Martian, very smart but not that powerful or fast.(humans)
6. The Amer, ultra smart but not strong, very fast(look like tiny Komodo Dragons that camoflouge to anything except white; thought to be extinct, but there is one)

App:
Name:
Species:
Weapons:

Members:

Name: Pet
Species: Martian
Weapon: The Whisperer

Name: Sharo
Species: Greylis
Weapon: Laser Sword

Name: Chad
Species: Greylis
Weapon: summon clones

Name: Essence
Species: Greylis
Weapons: Ruby Paw, Bionic Eye, Bloody Red Canine Teeth

Name: Windeh
Species: Amer
Weapons: Lightsaber

Name: Scourge
Species: Amer
Weapons: Double Shadowblades, Darki revolvers, and Semi-automatic Endbow

Name: Symph
Species: Amer
Weapons: Pick Axe,Knife,Chainsaw

Name: Tommy
Species: Greylis
Weapons: Ray Gun, Two Swords.

Name:Sonic
Species: Lythuir
Weapons: Flamesword, raygun.

Name: General Kiyoke
Species: Hoturki
Weapon: Barrels,Banana Peels,Fists
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story
« Reply #1 on: October 20, 2012, 06:31 pm »
Anybody wanna join?



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story
« Reply #2 on: October 20, 2012, 06:42 pm »
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story
« Reply #3 on: October 20, 2012, 06:44 pm »
Ooooh me! =D




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Re: Peter's Sploder Story
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2012, 06:46 pm »
Sharo
Greylis
Laser sword
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story
« Reply #6 on: October 20, 2012, 06:49 pm »
Need 1 more person and Jmc has to finish his App, but I could do that for him.



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank!)
« Reply #7 on: October 20, 2012, 07:31 pm »
Chad
Greylis
Thunderstorm
 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank!)
« Reply #8 on: October 20, 2012, 10:18 pm »
Chapter 1
Sharo was bored out of his mind. The Greylis spaceship had to be the most boring place in the solar system! Sharo had to wait every day, wait for breakfeast till dinner, just waiting, like a caterpillar in a cocoon! He couldn't stand it, sure there was training, but it was so tiring and hard. The drill surgeon was always yelling," Faster! Harder! Pie!" Right now, Sharo was training, and training, and training. He was so tired, he could fall asleep for 10 years. The training was that hard. The surroundings were just as dull as the schedule. Gray room, brown excersice equipment, and people, boy was it crowded!

 Suddenly, the alarm went off, the lights were turned off; red light from the alarm cast panicked faces only visible every few seconds. The ship rocked to the left and many people were hurled that way. Sharo, quick as a fox, grabbed the flag pole. The ship rocked to the right, Sharos fingers were tiring and not to mention slipping, it was like the pole was ice. The ship was struck yet agan, sirens blaring, Sharo lost his grip and fell down on the floor.
Then, as quickly as the sirens had come on, it all stopped. A voice shouted," Sorry, that was just a drill, you may return to your activities."



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #9 on: October 20, 2012, 10:29 pm »
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #10 on: October 20, 2012, 10:33 pm »
Oh can't be just thunderstorms? Then summon clones x2
 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #11 on: October 20, 2012, 10:50 pm »
Name: Essence
Physical Features: Black Wolf (Comes With Species), Red Scar Across Face, Blood Streaks
Species: Greylis
Weapons: Ruby Paw, Bionic Eye, Bloody Red Canine Teeth


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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #12 on: October 20, 2012, 10:53 pm »
Seriously, why do everyone like Greylis I mean, wolves are epic, but everybody chooses them?



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2012, 10:56 pm »
Name: Windeh
Species: Amer
Weapons: Lightsaber :D
 
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 1 released)
« Reply #14 on: October 20, 2012, 11:15 pm »
Chapter 2
Sharo headed to the Cafeteria after the drill. The line was of course long, so long you might call it a centipede if you were a poet. Of course poets are always exaggerating things, wait so are writers...
Okay back on track, ignore that last part. As Sharo was waiting, another Greylis came up to him," Hi, my name is Chad, I'm new here because I was just found on Amerjaden, I'm your new dorm partner."
Sharo responded," Name's Sharo, strange name, I know, don't ask me why my parents named me that. Heard about today's sudden drill?" "Yeah, the drill was actually a distraction to get me onboard un-noticed, I have no idea why they wanted to sneak me here," Chad responded."How long have you been here?" "Couple of days, I think 3, this place is one dump, I'll say that now." Sharo said. "At least you aren't dead, right?" Chad asked. "Yeah, I guess," Sharo said as he put some gravy on his plate. Sharo looked around the Cafeteria for a seat. Most tables were already taken, it was just as crowded in here as a metal coffin made for a midget in which a basketball player was stuck in. Bulletin boards, posters, and menus were strung across the small Cafeteria. The floor was dirty with gravy and milk spilled from people who tripped. The Janitor's job would probably have been easier if they had made the Cafeteria larger. It would have prevented many people from tripping. Sharo finally found two open seats and sat down. He waved at Chad," I saved a spot!" "So is there a reason the Cafeteria had to be so tiny?" Chad asked. "Not really," Sharo replied."Must be a claustrophobic person's nightmare, eh?" Chad laughed," Yeah.



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #15 on: October 20, 2012, 11:33 pm »
Name: Scourge
Species: Amer
Weapons: Double Shadowblades, Darki revolvers, Semi-automatic Endbow, Poison Cobra fangs
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« Reply #16 on: October 20, 2012, 11:34 pm »
Name: Scourge
Species: Amer
Weapons: Double Shadowblades, Darki revolvers, Semi-automatic Endbow, Poison Cobra fangs

 :O
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #17 on: October 20, 2012, 11:35 pm »
:O
 Do you know what BloodClan is?
You read Warriors?



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #18 on: October 20, 2012, 11:39 pm »
Name: Scourge
Species: Amer
Weapons: Double Shadowblades, Darki revolvers, Semi-automatic Endbow, Poison Cobra fangs
No Cobra fangs



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #19 on: October 20, 2012, 11:39 pm »
You read Warriors?

 xP Yup (And yes, my question to Chim was an indirect way of asking this).

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #20 on: October 20, 2012, 11:44 pm »
I'm on Omen of the Stars bk 3 or was it 2?or 4?



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #21 on: October 20, 2012, 11:46 pm »
:O
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HELL YEA.
Firestar killed Scourage yes?
No Cobra fangs
Fine. =P
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« Reply #22 on: October 21, 2012, 12:01 am »
HELL YEA.
Firestar killed Scourage yes?Fine. =P

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« Reply #23 on: October 21, 2012, 12:03 am »
xP Yup.
Gaurdians of Ga'Hoole is another one I love.
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« Reply #24 on: October 21, 2012, 12:04 am »
Gaurdians of Ga'Hoole is another one I love.

 I've been thinking about checking 'em out after I finish OotS.

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« Reply #25 on: October 21, 2012, 12:05 am »
I've been thinking about checking 'em out after I finish OotS.
I highly reccomend them.
Really good books if you like Warriors.
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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #26 on: October 21, 2012, 09:34 am »
 :o
Gaurdians of Ga'hoole? I finished those like 2 years ago or was it 1? I dunno. All of them are pretty good, I prefer the one where Coryn becomes king.



 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #27 on: October 21, 2012, 09:36 am »
I'll do the amer.
I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you are looking for ransom, I can tell you I don't have money. But what I do have are a very particular set of skills; skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you...
 

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Re: Peter's Sploder Story (join for free thank; Chapter 2 released)
« Reply #28 on: October 21, 2012, 09:39 am »
nawp, the species is supposed to be endangered. Chose the Lythuir.



 

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« Reply #29 on: October 21, 2012, 10:33 am »
Chapter 3
Location: Earth
Time: During Lunch
"Those humans will never expect us to be here," Scourge said."on their old home." "Yep," Windeh said," Now we just need to find the old junked up Plasma Cannon and its Mech."

Location: Amerjaden
Time: Middle of Training

Announcer: We have captured all remaining Greylis and Srylis on this planet, now we can beginsearching for those two escape pods!
Crowd: YAY!

Location: Mars
Time: Same time as the announcment

"Have you located the remaining two Amer, yet?" Pet said."We can't let the public know that those lizards are roaming free, even one of them could destroy a whole planet with their extraordinary minds."
The ISS agent replied," No, sir, they are too elusive and clever, if you could perhaps allow us to use thw Whisperer-" "NO!" Pet shouted."The Whisperer is too dangerous in its prototype stage."