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Offline kingpiggy

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My Rap about older Brothers!
« on: August 10, 2012, 06:29 am »
Older Brother, you gotta listen to me, your evil and dumb and you don't brush your teeth!

Every time you get drunk we put up with your junk, and no, you can't take a motorbike apart and fix it again.....older brother, your a great big pain!

We know we both hate, make no mistake, be both dislike each other, and whats all this? Obsession with guns? Shooting people in the face? Not my Fun...

When you tattle on me, your version of the story is way too dramatic, and when you rub a cats fur backwards, its doesn't make static! (They Never pay attention in class)

Feed back? :P
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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #1 on: August 10, 2012, 06:39 am »
It is actually really good but needs to be longer
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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #2 on: August 10, 2012, 08:07 am »
I happen to be an older brother myself. ;(
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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #3 on: August 10, 2012, 08:36 am »
bump
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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #4 on: August 10, 2012, 08:40 am »
Pretty lame IMO.
 

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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #5 on: August 10, 2012, 08:40 am »
How old are you? o.O



 

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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2012, 10:15 am »
That

Was

Awful

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Re: My Rap about older Brothers!
« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2012, 12:45 pm »
Well, I'm not very good at song writing. But I gave my best, that's all that matters. I don't really care if you don't like it. I like it, and that's all that I care about.
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