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I finally have made the website. Here is the link:
http://tobestertobessploderstory.yolasite.com/

I'm having a go ( for the third time) at doing a story. This one I will keep up-to-date and even make a website for it. I will be accepting most members who post their application as spaces aren't too limited but I will have to stop at some point.

Intro:
Hexo. A name that is feared throughout this land. Several years ago, he brought darkness to our land and took up the throne that has not been used for centuries. He destroyed those who disagreed with him or made them his servants using his most deadliest power, the blood point. This changes everyone to his side at one touch; a fatal weapon for most. Nobody dares to go against him as it is likely they won't survive. However, one person is willing to risk his life to save others and get revenge on Hexo. A prophecy has been foretold that this person, man or women, will gather a group who, just like them, want revenge on Hexo.
That person is me. I'm Archer, the one who wants revenge on Hexo for something he did when I was young. I am trying to find a group just like me, with special powers and who want revenge on Hexo. However, rumor has it that he is also gathering men to make his force stronger.
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Application:
Name: (Not your Username unless you have a short, just letters username)
Powers: (Just one)
Side: (Archer's or Hexo's. Please not too many neutrals)
Weapon:
Species: Human, Blood Soldier or Cyclops (Only needed for evil side)
Story: (Why you want revenge on Hexo)
« Last Edit: August 24, 2012, 06:26 am by tobestertobes »
 

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|Chapter 1|

The large wooden doors creaked open and a large black figure walked in. He bowed to the front of the room as the doors immediately closed with a loud boom. "You have found them I take it?" a loud voice echoed through the large room. It was very dark and the voice was shielded in the shadows. The bowed man shivered - not with cold, but with fear.
"I..um well. No, my lord. He got away." The man drooped his head in shame. He had failed his master's orders again, this usually called for punishment.
"You stated there was only one? I though there was a group of them." His voice became angrier with every word. "Can I not trust you to get me the right information, never mind completing your task." He stood up and walked toward the man on the ground; revealing himself in the bright sunlight. He was tall and very big. His muscles bulged in his dark black robe. Although he was not in battle, beneath the long robe was a bronze chest plate and a leather belt with scabbard. Tuck into it was the almighty weapon, the Blood Point. "I am sorry, it seems he has not formed his team yet and it was not I who provided you the information, it was the prophecy holders." He raised his voice in defense until he saw Hexo's face. "Hmm. You may go, I have enough good in my heart to give you another chance. Round up our army and give the the briefing - we must defeat Archer."
"Ha. You say that every time and yet it never happens." His servant muttered as we walked back toward the large wooden doors. Hexo growled from his throne, his voice full of anger and annoyance. Standing up, he drew his sword as though under the impression someone was spying on him. "What do you want?" he growled.
"You know exactly what I want Hexo. You've been rejecting me for years. All I ask is to get your agreement - nothing else."
"NEVER! You know I will never agree to you. I have more important things to worry about...there is a war being prepared." He thrust his sword into the marble floor giving off green and red sparks.
"More important than getting Archer on your side or even destroying him?" Hexo's eyes grew wide and his mouth opened in surprise. "I thought not. But still, if you won't let me on your side then I'll get Archer and his team myself." With a loud swish he was gone. Hexo was about to open his mouth to argue when he realized that the man had gone. Shivering, it was obvious the Lord of Dark was frightened by the man or just alarmed. Anyhow, he definitely didn't like him.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2012, 11:48 am by tobestertobes »
 

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Name: (Not your Username unless you have a short, just letters username) Zcet
Powers: (Just one) Ice
Side: (Archer's or Hexo's. Please not too many neutrals) Archer
Weapon: Sword
Story: (Why you want revenge on Hexo) I have heard rumors about him. Evil man, that jerk. I want revenge. He killed my parents. My family. Now lets kick some serious ass!
« Last Edit: May 26, 2012, 02:45 pm by Sonicdude102 »
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Posted By: Sonicdude102Name: (Not your Username unless you have a short, just letters username) Zcet
Powers: (Just one) Ice
Side: (Archer's or Hexo's. Please not too many neutrals) Archer
Weapon: Sword
Story: (Why you want revenge on Hexo) He a jerk

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Application:
Name: (Not your Username unless you have a short, just letters username): Nero
Powers: (Just one):Lightning
Side: (Archer's or Hexo's. Please not too many neutrals)Archer's
Weapon: Thunder Sword
Species: Human, Blood Soldier or Cyclops (Only needed for evil side)Human
Story: (Why you want revenge on Hexo) My parents were faithful servants of Hexo. They helped him in every possible way. But one day, Hexo skilled them because they were of no use to him anymore. Since then, I roam the lands improving my control over lightning and sword fighting to become a great warrior and get revenge on Hexo.
A pizza with ants....
Pessimist: There are ants in my pizza.
Optimist:OH YEAH! FREE ANTS!
Bear Grylls: There is a pizza in my ants.
 

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ap

name:Trans
Powez:  Alchemy, ninja
side:  Whichever benefits me most at any given time.
Weapon:  staff with flipout blade
species:  Unknown, and yet I am humanoid.  i wear a cloak.  :P
Story:  I am an Orpham, and have been taught to fend 4 myself/
 

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Posted By: trans301ap

name:Trans
Powez:  Alchemy, ninja
side:  Whichever benefits me most at any given time.
Weapon:  staff with flipout blade
species:  Unknown, and yet I am humanoid.  i wear a cloak.  :P
Story:  I am an Orpham, and have been taught to fend 4 myself/


Can you be evil please? I have no evil at the moment and I need some.


Posted By: kartik100Application:
Name: (Not your Username unless you have a short, just letters username): Nero
Powers: (Just one):Lightning
Side: (Archer's or Hexo's. Please not too many neutrals)Archer's
Weapon: Thunder Sword
Species: Human, Blood Soldier or Cyclops (Only needed for evil side)Human
Story: (Why you want revenge on Hexo) My parents were faithful servants of Hexo. They helped him in every possible way. But one day, Hexo skilled them because they were of no use to him anymore. Since then, I roam the lands improving my control over lightning and sword fighting to become a great warrior and get revenge on Hexo.

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Name: Midnight
Powers: Can Stop movements (so any movement will be stopped in a short period of time)
Side: Hexo
Weapon: Axe (Very sharp and powerful)
Species: Blood Soldier
Story: I tried to go against Hexo with my own team but I failed and was banished. Now I want to punish Archer and show how strong I am
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QUESTION: Do you have to be cyclops if I'm on the evil side? Or I can do any?
 

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Posted By: Xploder9000QUESTION: Do you have to be cyclops if I'm on the evil side? Or I can do any?

Any.
 

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Posted By: Xploder9000Name: Midnight
Powers: Can Stop movements (so any movement will be stopped in a short period of time)
Side: Hexo
Weapon: Axe (Very sharp and powerful)
Species: (I will put the species if I saw my question answered)
Story: I used to be Archer's Powerful war leader, but when I lost a battle, they fire me. Now I want to punish the archers how strong I am.

Btw, I am Archer and there was no group against Hexo before this one. I've got a story for you though.

Story:
I tried to go against Hexo with my own team but I failed and was banished. Now I want to punish Archer and show how strong I am.
 

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I'll read this, not interested in taking part :3
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Posted By: jackjoshsebI'll read this, not interested in taking part :3

Okay. I'm making a web soon.
 

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Chapter 1 extended.
 

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Website has been made. Check it to see the whole story. Link:
http://tobestertobessploderstory.yolasite.com/
 

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Epic, when do I come in?
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Posted By: Sonicdude102Epic, when do I come in?

Chapter 2. I've only made chapter 1 at the moment which is just about Hexo.
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Posted By: tobestertobes
Posted By: Sonicdude102Epic, when do I come in?

Chapter 2.


I edited my app
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Username: jimso
Power: Sonic Screams (Controlable Hyper pitch voice)
Side: Archer's
Weapon: Flame Sword
Species: Human
Story: I was Overloaded in a Raidiation chamber full of special dino gems at birth which gave the power of super natural senses. I decided to use it for good, I am under Hexos curse.
« Last Edit: May 26, 2012, 02:52 pm by jimso »
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Posted By: jimsoUsername: jimso
Power: Sonic Screams (Controlable Hyper pitch voice)
Side: Archer's
Weapon: Flame Sword

Story?
 

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Name:Jake
Powers:Phychic
Side:Good
Weapon:Gold Thunder Axe
Species:Human
Story:I Was Working in a Dark Mine When Hexo found me.He Mistreated Me and made me his slave.He then went off to destory my family.When I Got there I was too late.He destroyed them.I tried to kill him but he gave me critical descision.Ever Since, I've been looking to Eradicate Him.
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Posted By: sonicwerehog234Name:Jake
Powers:Phychic
Side:Good
Weapon:Blue Lightning Sword
Species:Cat
Story:I Was Working in a Dark Mine When Hexo found me.He Mistreated Me and made me his slave.He then went off to destory my family.When I Got there I was too late.He destroyed them.I tried to kill him but he gave me critical descision.Ever Since, I've been looking to Eradicate Him.

You can't be a cat. You have to be Human if your good if your bad you can only be Human, Cyclops or Blood Soldier.
 

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Posted By: tobestertobes
Posted By: sonicwerehog234Name:Jake
Powers:Phychic
Side:Good
Weapon:Blue Lightning Sword
Species:Cat
Story:I Was Working in a Dark Mine When Hexo found me.He Mistreated Me and made me his slave.He then went off to destory my family.When I Got there I was too late.He destroyed them.I tried to kill him but he gave me critical descision.Ever Since, I've been looking to Eradicate Him.

You can't be a cat. You have to be Human if your good if your bad you can only be Human, Cyclops or Blood Soldier.
I forgot the story, Btw I added it
Read The Post >:)